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Arcane
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i'll kick a flow so you feeling the chills, your lacking the skills/
i got you in deep waters but your missing the gills/
subliminal thrills, have you jumping from the steepest of hills/
and the rhythm has you higher then Hitlers gas and electricity bills/
come over and face my faction, i have you tripping over the actions/
every verse written is no less then satisfaction/
bars created for interaction, top of the list is where im at son/
i put the pen to paper and atom explode in a chain reaction/
i suggest you disperse, or contact a medical nurse/
because the last ride you taking is on a spiritual hearse/
this shit is a curse, you need to keep rocking a purse/
do some soul searching and have your rhythm reversed/
your tasting the gravel, your whole style is fragile/
put a clean cut on ya chest your bleeding from the scalpel/
lets take it to the grapple, my style of lyrics is astral/
so your getting put down like disease infected cattle/
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sounds like a diss rap, directed towards who i wonder?

but none the less some dope lines liked the hitlers bills line

and welcome to illest man, seems like you'll be a good edition
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hey thank you man XD
glad to be here. and it wasnt a diss to anyone just most my stuff is like this. My battle stuff is more rugged.
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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Most of the multi's were right on point and I found your flow easily. You did really well with some metaphors, but some seemed really simple and kind of forced. Over-all, I liked the drop and hope to see you bring more to the table. Welcome to Illest.
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Thank you Murk.
i'll be sure to come back stronger every time
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Nice drop man, liked the flow some of the lines were dope, hope to hear more from u soon

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