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88SkyLink - Just Spitting

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I'm about to go in like a semen, never will I use protection
I'm going hard on you bitch-ass pussies, Im that huge erection
I got that nude selection, you choose which parts are revealing
I can never lose elections, the way I got oppositions retrieving
Those who aint believing, will be seen in heaven for being sceptics
Cuz Im the best with rhymes, you can't decline, just go accept it
"Mann" Im "buzzing" like electric, but does that make me a new-bee?
Im a beast when it comes to bars, no wonder my rhymes got that beauty
Im so cold when I spit that fire, I got that paradoxical game
When I get topical, I write so much, that I cause tropical flames
Cuz rappers, they "leave" so soon, like a "tree" in autumn
I spit so ill like a "virus", my "sick" mind needs "Norton"
You can see it like "Windows", but I keep it "low" like Limbo
Spit a punchline so hard, that I'll knock your whole chin bro
I never spit in "vein" like a wrist, I'm kinda like the 'risk it' kind
"Stretching" words from my thoughts, cuz I still got that "twisted" mind
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Rusty for your first but its ok

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Post by pest »

the first few bars were fire... after that u fell off...
shit was iight tho
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i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: 88SkyLink - Just Spitting

Post by Grim »

yeah man..you opened strong but kind of lost it a little...i like where you were going with it but you didn't quite get there...this site will hold you to higher standards,,,keep dropping though for sure and work on your complexity.....solid post just keep the lyricism thru the whole piece
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thnx
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