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Joe Saint
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Re: 15 Million Degrees

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this was a good drop the only thing that didnt flow with me was the chorus. keep at it
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Re: 15 Million Degrees

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You absolutely fucking KILLED IT with that third verse, my dude. Real shit. The piece as a whole was dope, flowed smoothly, had good abstract imagery in some parts, and there are so many things I wanted to quote that I just couldn't decide on anything. The chorus seemed inspired, as well. Very nice overall drop, man.
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