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AbZ The Beast
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i've blinded the eye of the storm..
Abz a very violent tyrant with horns.
covered in entrails,and crying for more
divide ya in fours,without a knife or a sword!!
Abz a viking/a lord whos is fighting for more
than fame and cash!
i want the whole fucking world in flames and ash!
Take a axe and snap....
still the top 100 billboard breaks and cracks..
Fuck god..abz created wrath..
foots steps leave a devastated path
never fake or act...its a fact i swim in waves of blood
a half man half beast with razor tusks.
naw i'm lying...i just made it up
i'm so underground at night i lay in mud
and play with slugs..and chill with worms
ah fuck it...i hope ya'll fill my words


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Re: Venting

Post by Mack Lazarus »

hardKore

mud n worms. KILLER shit
love the razor tusks and made it up.

hella nice.
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Re: Venting

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Thnx bro check my audios if ya dig this
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Re: Venting

Post by Joe Saint »

this shit was dope man im lookin forward to more drops like this
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Re: Venting

Post by QwarterZ »

This was a nice piece...
the flow was short yet decent
the vocab matched it perfectly
and the sick demented style flowed
keep it up bruh!!!!!
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Re: Venting

Post by leeroi green »

"never fake or act...its a fact i swim in waves of blood
a half man half beast with razor tusks.
naw i'm lying...i just made it up
i'm so underground at night i lay in mud"

yo homie i gotta say i was well impressed with this piece you keep working out like that and you'll be super heavy weight of the world lol serious though nice
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Re: Venting

Post by MonuMental »

You had a nice little crazy flow goin on here. I like the "beastly" imagery. It works well with your flow. Stay up and keep droppin.
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Re: Venting

Post by Defiance »

you know, now this sounds like horror core?

question mark signifies that i have no idea what i'm talking bout

but this shit reminded me off some heavy metal rap shit..


good flow man
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Re: Venting

Post by Grim »

this was a solid piece...nice multies, smooth flow and decent concept...i like this...by the way..how's my sig coming? LOL
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Re: Venting

Post by Kau the Lion »

Sick flow. This piece really fit the name "Abz the Beast", if you know what I mean.
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