J steel vs leeroi green (Leeroi wins KO)

[Jsteel]

check,house rules ,no fliparounds . breakdown yo votes peeps ..4 bars ,il drop first

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-- Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:48 am --

ima send my rap in 2 or more mesages cuz im using my phone and limited to space

[leeroi green]

thought i checked a long time ago sorry chiggity check

[Jsteel]

this pussies also a dick,a heteorosexual bitch,looky at this ,menstrual tension,in clit ,thus him moody ,thats the definite lesson period ... a good thing that he can fuck himself,cuz even a prostitute doesnt wana fuck him ,pals ...continued...2 mo

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-- Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:01 am --

fucken kryptonite,aint no superman here in tights,your raps are midget,every green falls short,look at seth bitches,if you were greens as in weed il rape your mother nature,by setting fields upon fields alight,then cremate ya,fuck yal all over,undertaker

-- Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:01 am --

ryt,ur drop

-- Mon Apr 25, 2011 4:02 am --

ryt,ur drop, expo the line with seth,i mean the actor seth green

[leeroi green]

0 and 4 and look still without a hope
if he was flo rida's governor J couldn't steal a vote

im the lyrical equiv to jigsaw i'll rip this bitches lips off
and put an ass whoopin on you the likes of nasa couldnt lift off

i bust rhymes like santas buttons at lunch time
if someone said you was bustin grapes well then they plum lied

cus we aint seen no beating like this since that movie drum line
so run like you got ten warrants and saw 1-time

EASY

[Grim]

i really can't comment on this J...you NEVER drops enough bars...4 bars=8lines...LEEROI in every cat...

MVGT: LEEROI

[Kuhlerblynd]

Cat sweep to Leeroi Green in this one.

Steel, you do have some nice concepts, but when your write you bars like that, its hard to find the flow and that takes away from it to someone reading it. I know you are on your phone, maybe you oculd try editing one line at a time or something fam? It would be alot better for you in the long run.

Green, as usual, good stuff. Ive seen you come harder though.

Vote-Green

[Alvin]

Tun tun Tuuuun

MVGT Leeroi green


J Steel, figure out a tactic to post your battles better man, place some of theses >/< to seperate where it ends. Your doing ok, just aim at your opponent more, try more personals or nameflips.


Leeroi Green, You didnt take every cat, other than your first bar, it was very generic. Good, but very open. Aim better, and stop slacking because you think your opponent is shit.

[Mitty]

I hate to say it, but I agree with Panda. Bring it every battle Lee. You got my vote strictly because J Steel has no structure so I couldn't understand anything really.

MVGT:LEEROI

[Alvin]

-Thread Closed & Records Updated-

Leeroi Green wins KO