KiLLaH vs Mack Lazarus (K KILLAH WINS KO)

[K KiLLaH]

12 lines


I attach pain to wack lames who yap claims/
While hes talking bout making stacks rain...WHAM!! Ima drop young money like MACK MAYNE!!/
The Facts Plain!! Bitch Ya Initial is "L" You Got TWO/
About ta catch a Double "U" URFED UNDER muh Shoes/
Mirk n Plunder this Dude KiLLing Stealing his Strife/
Skinny n hype "M" "L" aint never seen a Meal/mil in his life!!/
Saying hes i'll when he writes n draws guns..yeah doodling clips/
You lacks da Mac's and da cheese I'll split ya noodle in 5ths
Ya just a poodle a bitch with white skin and a menstrual
I cramped ya style n I can tell ya getting pink don't be tense dude
I aint mean to offend you, ya just a herb in my tracks/
Yeah ya'll heard that im back i'll jack the meaning of his name its return of the MACK!!

[Mack Lazarus]

Just Like in Manila,Its your doomsday
DuDes gonna Kill the Gorilla. "Boomba Yay!"

I float like an Astronaut. Sting like muriatic acid
Thats why Macks your boss, Your'e just an ass kiss

Don't get blasted. Dont get frustrated at this madness
MacK illah than than the stench from your fat bitches mattress.

In fact, shit. This is just practice. Im yawnin already
Youre about to lose all your credibility

Now that Mack got his losses out the way. Its time for your ass to kneel down n pray
I hate my opponent. And right now thats you. so Ima take a moment and remove you like a bad tattoo.

My shit actually DOESNT stink. at least not compared to YOU. Yer Doo Doo. Pure Poo Poo.
Your bad news like Hoo Doo. "someones been workin roots on you" You Better get your brick dust soon.
or yer screwed.

[Grim]

ok..both verses were decent..Mack,once again wrote a good "verse" but not real strong for a battle...not direct...killah was direct but still not too hard...both had some decent word play but I enjoyed killah's more...Mack...you are really close having it figured out just get more personal..that last line you had rhymed alot but that poo poo stuff really killed it and seemed youthful...the multies were nice though...as a battle verse overall I gotta go...

MVGT: KILLAH...you are real close though mack..keep at it

[Mitty]

I think killah killed it with the multies and flow and pretty much every category out there until Mack finds that soldier in him...MVGT:KILLAH

[Mack Lazarus]

up

[Omnie]

Punches - Killah
Flow - Killah
Personals - ...

Overall: Killah took it by attacking his opponent, cuz neither verse was hard hitting at all. Nameplay was meh from both sides. Killah I've seen better from you, and Mack, this is first battle I peep from you. You got potential man, your flow is good, multies are there, just try to attack your opponent with every line...less self hype more dissing...and I agree with Grim on that poo poo stuff, always try to be creative cuz that looks basic and like you didn't try...

Anyways...+1 Killah

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[Alvin]

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