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Bursting Pipes

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Hey .. Im Demo
N This Is For U

Ok'
I Am Not Human.. On Some Mars Shit So Caution
Universal Killer.. Im Marchin Wit Martians
Jus Bombin N Harmin.. Anyone Walkin Departin
Boi I Stay Focus.. Could Target Ah' Marksman
Im King Of Tha Jungle.. No Bargain Wit Tarzan
Yet I Bargain'd His Arms N Auction His Carcass
Ehh Im So Heartless.. Verse Stab Slash N Butcher
Str8 Killers On Tha Screen.. Heigi Ashton Kutcher
I Keep It Ah' Buck.. You Kinda Close Like Four 20's
One Punch N Everyone Gettin Lift'd Like Its 420

lol. .Shitheads..

Bitch Its Demo.. Short For Demolition Demonstrations
Spittin Nothin Like You Can Sir Like Chemo Patients
Ammo Blazin Killin You Sick Mutha Fuckas
Str8 Sonnin Yo Shit Like Im Bout To Go Fuck Yo Mother


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Lol this was a good display of "shit that you can do". And it was a good use of multies, overall nice drop, seemed like a horrorcore verse.

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Im Hoppin On Tha Those Links Now.. I Got U Relik

Thanks For Tha FeedBack M33Kish.
Im In A Battle So Vote On That Soon..

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yeah dude you got a different style to writing

transferrs good into an audio flow which is nice

liking the Target a marksman line shit was illy

nice man

keep um coming
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