I Get Fucked Up

[MesaR]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/circl ... ml#p168206
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First solo track ever, "I get fucked up"
..This is for all you piss pot drunk cunts..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UN1WPoLx ... ded#at=127

[Loon E Lou]

beat is pretty ill dawg. hook pretty pretty proper man. ya flow is tight. i get fucked up. haha the story of my life. damn im diggin that beat tho for real. i never really been a fan of aussie hip hop but this was nice. jus cus of the accent but like i said, this was nice to hear. you really delivered it with good hype and energy man. my type of song simply cus of the content. i think you maybe could of cut back on sayin "fucked up" during your verses, jus because its a "fucked up" overload during the hook. i was able to understand everything so i suppose the production was pretty good as well. alright mixin, but seemed like the second verse was a little low?? i dunno but for your first solo track, you did real good man. you were able to stay on topic throughout the song, which cant really be said about alot of solo rappers nowadays, where each verse is something different, and the hook has nothing to do with the verses. anyway, nice drop man. keep droppin shit. never stop

[MesaR]

Thanks for the feedback Loonie, It's just a shadowville instrumental too man.

[TreTru]

okay..this beat was pretty nice ..but i think you did good with the flo and deliv and tones of da hook..the accent caught me off guard at first but by the 3rd hook it kinda added 2 the deliv imo..hahaha some funny lines..yeah i agree its either the 2nd or 3rd verse that seems a lil low..id say for a first solo this is a good effort and these type of songs are fun to listen to so good choice...

[Kause mc]

Hey bro like i told u yesterday good work on this one. You killed ur verses. And considering its ur 1st solo track the hook is pre good n suits the verses well lol makes me laugh u cocky bastard! Love it good stuff

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