Another one

[Defiance]

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just a cool flow i thought i'd drop, got some sick meanings and intents.. tell me what you think, i'll try and feed your shit.

uppin

[The Hand of God]

Stoupe beats >

this mix wasn't very good though, it's hard to here you and you can tell you're in either a really 'hard' environment or an open room

content was dope, although i think you'd benefit from a few separate tracks so you're not trailing off words

[Defiance]

upping

[Immortal Jav]

it was dope except. it sounded weird & off .but enjoyable very much

[Defiance]

yeah its cause i havent figured out how to mix yet and im using a shit program and mic to record with, but thats all gonea change next 7th. im buying an interface and recording program along with a new 400$ mic

uppin

[Immortal Jav]

yeah im felling ya i got a shit program myself.
when you get a better quality it would be definitely worth hearing.

[Audible Thought]

its kinad wierd IMO, not bad, just wierd. Definately need to work on mixing, im working on that myself. You show alotta potential with the flow, just keep workin.

The cough in the middle made me laugh, was that intentional?

[Defiance]

no, i just had to cough... cant stop the show for a cough

[lyrical1]

JMT beat, nice call, lyrics were tight, im sure cats have said enuf about the sound.