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Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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MesaR
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That Was Straight....I liked The First Bit And The Last Bars Of Your Poem It Would Of been abit better To do some Multis..In The Middle But It still wasnt Bad Good Job...8/10.
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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need ur Link JJ but it wasnt bad same thing as sequence said -1-
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Yeah Man Get That Link In There For Some On Lock It...
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You Could of Flowed Better in This Piece if You Ask
Me But i Felt Emotion in it i've seen U Spit Betta Shit
Your Bars Are Kinda Weird In This Smalla Den Usual lol
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i aim to spray leaving nothing but broken dreams and "diminished-evidence"
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

this is solid i like it keep it up.

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