Song for my father - No Words

[Leeroy Jenkins]

Links coming

[Alvin]

yo man, your flow is on point like no shit on point. The singer sounds like he's restricting himself. Or he lacks the confidence, not sure if you did it or if it came with the beat. You rode the beat very well, awesome track really. It was in a spot no one looks, so i moved it, hope you dont mid. The story is dope man, real heart felt. I will say, at some points it seems like your vocals fade out, maybe the limiter is too harsh and pushes your vocals when the beat comes in harder? The delivery pattern is dope. The ending thought is awesome, ya got a skill for writing man, im intimidated lol. nice drop man.

[Leeroy Jenkins]

yo man, your flow is on point like no shit on point. The singer sounds like he's restricting himself. Or he lacks the confidence, not sure if you did it or if it came with the beat. You rode the beat very well, awesome track really. It was in a spot no one looks, so i moved it, hope you dont mid. The story is dope man, real heart felt. I will say, at some points it seems like your vocals fade out, maybe the limiter is too harsh and pushes your vocals when the beat comes in harder? The delivery pattern is dope. The ending thought is awesome, ya got a skill for writing man, im intimidated lol. nice drop man.

Yeah, I did the singing but I was sick at the time. I couldn't use my soprano voice at ALL. I appreciate the feedback though

[Kurse]

Seldom do I come across a track of this magnitude here on illest, so when I do, it's an absolute treat. I have to tell ya Jenkin's...this shit was, without a shadow of a doubt...an EXCELLENT track. I have to disagree with Panda, I think the overall sound of the hook was great. It really fit the overall mood of the song and was executed with grace. The lyrics were solid, the emotion was present, and even though I think the mixing could've used a little improvement, I'm still going to give this one a 10/10.
...and that's a rare score coming from me. Great job Jenks.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/say-f ... 21449.html
^^^ Now if you could feed my recent drop it would be appreciated.

[Loon E Lou]

awwww man your flow is sick amigo. yea the hook takes juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuust a bit from the track. but still, this track brought me chills man. the content is just awesome man. you were able to put an unspeakable event into a piece of art. the beat complimented the lyrics and vice versa. i cant even imagin what it would be like to go through sumt like that. major respect for layin this man. a track like this needs to be delivered with emotion, and you put it all on the table. i dont think you held back at all. production was clean. awesome track yo

[Mitty]

A hot piece.