Anyone ever write a verse. And want to go back and rewrite it
because you don't like the way it came out. Yet you cant because
your mind state has changed.
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Re: uhhh i hate it
i don't really like rewriting verses, if i don't like it i'll typically just scrap the whole verse and subject and keep a few lines for something elsecomplexity wrote:Anyone ever write a verse. And want to go back and rewrite it
because you don't like the way it came out. Yet you cant because
your mind state has changed.
problem i run into alot is i write verses too long, i don't pay attention to how many bars i've got down and end up with like 24 bar verses and i gotta get rid of some bars while trying to maintain the content and message
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