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uhhh i hate it

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Anyone ever write a verse. And want to go back and rewrite it
because you don't like the way it came out. Yet you cant because
your mind state has changed.
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I try to not think like that, although I do anyways. But I just write out in freestyle anyways, so I can't really get mad at it if I have mostly a good verse.

Plus...if I do feel that way in excess, then I just add on and write in a different vibe.
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yeah happens to me thats why when i write i try finishing in one session , i have loads of uncompleted writtens basically because i stopped writing and went to sleep and came back to write the other day and i was like maan fuck it.
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Post by drunken jesus »

complexity wrote:Anyone ever write a verse. And want to go back and rewrite it
because you don't like the way it came out. Yet you cant because
your mind state has changed.
i don't really like rewriting verses, if i don't like it i'll typically just scrap the whole verse and subject and keep a few lines for something else

problem i run into alot is i write verses too long, i don't pay attention to how many bars i've got down and end up with like 24 bar verses and i gotta get rid of some bars while trying to maintain the content and message
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Post by complexity »

Yah. I run into that problem as well.
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yup happens 2 me @ least once a week LOL
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