J STEEL VS MONEYMAKER (Money wins KO)

[Jsteel]

3 bars,ima drop just now

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-- Sat Apr 09, 2011 12:08 am --

My pens point is a veld fire/It burns holes thru paper(Money),its hells write up/i pres on,trees i cut ,they fel ,i admire/this work,its gr8ter dan my sick relm,know the science how u gona run a mint factory,wen plantz dyin,muney makr haz dyd

-- Sat Apr 09, 2011 12:11 am --

explanation, trees are used to make paper,the mint line iz a pun,az im talkn bwt the mint plant and mint wer muney iz made

-- Sat Apr 09, 2011 12:11 am --

explanation, trees are used to make paper,the mint line iz a pun,az im talkn bwt the mint plant and mint wer muney iz made,

[Moneymaker]

J got cancer from working in a coal mine/
but all you found was a cold mind/

Steel you cant rap go back to poetry/
Stop calling out battlers, your flows like a tree/

Youll never win just go home and cry to your husband/
That you were called a pussy and hit with a rubberband/

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-- Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:47 am --

Uppin for votes

-- Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:39 pm --

Uppin for votes

[pest]

man...
no hate but both verses were weak...

Both coulda came harder...

Steel... couldnt quite catch your flow... punches were weak....

Money... You had flow but your punches were weak...

So really MVGT Money...
Just cuz you hadd the flow...


1-0 Money upp...

[Grim]

i co-sign pest..this battle lacked umph..and monet...still no real punches but your flow was better...respect to both but step it up ya'll....
overall money had a better verse so..MVGT:MoneyMaker

[Alvin]

Ahem...

J, I don't qualify that as 3 bars, sorry bro, I understand that ur on a celly, check it, so am I.
I see ur wordplay and intended punches, they're just not connecting, but keep at it.

Money, ur punches are lacking as well, so try adding more substance. Lucky for you, your opponent isn't that great so MVGT money.

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[Moneymaker]

3-0 i win by K.O.

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-- Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:31 pm --

lets close this

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed and records updated.

Money wins KO.