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Static
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I’m grinding like an old set car brakes,
When I put my foot down the street shakes,
Raised to do whatever it may take,
stay real, keep your aim straight,
and remember to always avoid fake,
Times are hard and they ain’t getting easy,
Hidden from view but I’m gonna make the public see me,
inside i’m a beast mixed with peace trapped in a cage, you can’t free me,
i take no shit, i take the notion,
flip it into perpetual motion,
then i’m like oh shit, i’m in the ocean,
fly with the fish, swim with pigeons,
weed smoke won’t cloud my vision,
just like Wayne, I’m on a mission,
Life isn’t what I wanted it to be,
I always expected generosity,
unfortunately all I got was hostility,
All I’ve done is cause misery,
But thats done now it’s my history,
I’m ready to move forward and get on with my life,
the choices I make need to be right,
You won’t see me in flight cause i’m ready to fight,
Imma live my life like it ends tonight,
I’m living life right in the moment,
it’s free will, you can’t own it,
a wrong decision doesn’t mean you’ve blown it,
as the door slams shut another one will open,
raise your glasses to the sky and scream
“here’s hoping!”,
keep your aim straight and know where your going
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Re: stay straight

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good post. out of 10 i would give it a 9
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Re: stay straight

Post by Tha Dark Prince »

Itz good, tho I'd give it an honest 6

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