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Defiance
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Unconventional

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a savage rhythm addict high on life? shit i'm high on acid
drunk with beer glasses as i'm weaving through traffic
feeling spastic as i convulse with every pulse of my beat
i might be fucked up but i still follow these pipe dreams
as the night seems to get darker as my pupils widen n dilate
as the silence escalates and my mind trips to violate
am i a messiah in the guise of hate cause my views skewed
what would you do? if the world exposed awkward new truths
would you shoot? or would you turn tail and run away
and be done away, cause it seems im running low on funds today
life is dumb to waste but i always find myself hiding from it
with a grumbling stomach always flyin high just to plummet
and till i reach the summit and publish hits of my spits
i'll be stuck as raps side kick getting kicked by the righteous
so i might just renew my self with brand new intentions
cut the tension and let the world witness my resurrection
cause my reflection is bothering me can't stand my own eyes
as the first stone flies calling to god but the phones tied
i've grown wise through my own mistakes as i made them
counting backwards still an outline thats gotta get the shade in
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Re: Unconventional

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Man I need you to hit me up i wanna do a song together man, what chu think?
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Re: Unconventional

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Not bad dude, Good concet, flows decent, and good use of vocab. Nice little read.

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good flow and lyrics, liking your style. Keep posting.
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Re: Unconventional

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upping feed will be returned
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