Murk McNasty vs JSteel (Murk wins KO)

[Kuhlerblynd]

4 bars, house rules


Blah blah blah


Heres my check into tonights match up....

[Jsteel]

Ayt,chek ,im gna drop

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-- Thu Apr 07, 2011 4:49 pm --

when i re tire,it aint da end,my tires just changed,redy to ride ovr mcnastys last breth.blizards on, my brain storms lyk a huricane,like an anorexic women in gale force ,ul get blown away,lion lines,rabid ,eat diz rat,my time,fagot, suicidl,readn my line

-- Thu Apr 07, 2011 4:50 pm --

cudnt drop proper,4 sum reasn,im limitd in space ,using d fone

-- Thu Apr 07, 2011 4:50 pm --

cudnt drop proper,4 sum reasn,im limitd in space ,using d fone

[Kuhlerblynd]

Doesnt seem like four bars to me family...

Four bars = 8 lines


It seems like you only did about half that, so to make it fair, Im going to match that... Lets get this quick one in...

Ayo...

"J" Steel, right? Aheemmmm....

The 'block' that has came~down remains~proud and will actively dis'play'~now
How I would NEVER go for a 'rebound', when the fact remains, Im 'knocking J~down'!!!!
(Fucking sick, I know...)

Man, come to my hood and your walls-gets-plastered with blood, while your hope's falling faster
Than the fact that the only way 'Steel gets any Face time', is when 'your-jaw gets-shattered'!!!

Votes open...

[Moneymaker]

My vote goes to murk.

Jsteel you used no nameplay or any mulites. Work on those and youll be very good battler.

Murk you just crushed him in every cat.

If u guys want me to explain more let me know i aint got no probelm with it

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[Jsteel]

Ayt 4sho bruh

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-- Thu Apr 07, 2011 9:40 pm --

Ayt 4sho bruh

[Omnie]

No need for a breakdown. Catsweep to Murky. Multies, wordplay, nameplay, flow. Punches were nice. J's structure was fucked, can't catch a flow at all. Idk why there's a comma after every two words...lol. This shouldn't even count. No hate Murk, this was just too easy...

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[JDR]

Vote - Murk. Cat sweep.

when i re tire,it aint da end,my tires just changed,redy to ride ovr mcnastys last breth.blizards on, my brain storms lyk a huricane,like an anorexic women in gale force ,ul get blown away,lion lines,rabid ,eat diz rat,my time,fagot, suicidl,readn my line

JSteel - I didn't know where your lines began or end. You really need to work on structure.
EX
.............
.............// Bar 1
.............
.............// Bar 2

You also didn't even throw a punch at kidd. You have to bring somethin' at him. No multies, no vocab just really basic. Check some other battles to get a feel on how people do it. Welcome to da site.

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed, records updated...

Murk wins KO.