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Talkin God......Angry

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Talkin to god... Angry

God,
I know we aint been speaking, shit we barely get along/
but right now my nerves are tweaking, praying while i write this song/
Gone are the days when my faith was untouchable/
It's to the point where honestly i dont fuck wit you/
You stripped me of everything/ and it only took you a week/
Sending bullets in the air hoping you'll bleed/
the deeds i've done were dirty, but never were they cheap/
I gotta wife and 2 daughters all 3 need to eat/
not worried bout me, they need a roof over their heads/
had one, over some weed, it was taken instead/
I know my decisions arent the best at times/
but the babies are innocent, they've commited no crimes/
So now i have to grimey, catch these rich niggas after the club and leave em wit no hope/
Give up they chains ,wallets and watches or take one 2 the throat/ No joke/
Way past fucking laughing, you wanna turn ya back? fuck it nigga i'm blasting/
Passing the weed to my niggas, hoping we dont crash/
For the cash its all or nothing, bussing at niggas runnin, pistol whip a niggas bitch, like you better tell me something/
So now i ask what am i supposed to do, given my situation/
I'm stressed the fuck out smokin ports and pacin/
I'm talkin to you God, ANSWER ME, TIMES A WASTING/
Empty this henny bottle staright, no chasing/
I'm Beggin for your help, tired of running from satan/
I need you to have my back, whenever you're ready step in/
Are you listenin? ( Click Clack) AMEN....

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I am the punishment of god.... Had you not Committed great sins, god would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.
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No problem man, Will do.
I am the punishment of god.... Had you not Committed great sins, god would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.
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Post by 32neilz »

This was nice bro, like the concept, can imagine people actually feel like this sometimes.

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nice deep drop man, the second religous peice since ive been back lol, but nice work look forward to seing your next piece and see if you can switch it up a little
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Well actually this was the start of the end of my faith in man and god bro
I am the punishment of god.... Had you not Committed great sins, god would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.
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Awesome! I like it. I'd listen to a song with these lyrics.
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not too shabby def feeling it and def understand it man keep it up
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