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Nightmares

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Verse 1:Grimm
I’ll make the nightmare on elm street seem like a dream.
I’ll make you bleed from the spleen just to see i’m supreme.
See i’m a beam, shine with a gleam. Mister Grimm here grind for the green.
Blind with a keen….sense of reality. You cry and you scream, you die in your sleep.
Poisoned slowly, scianide in your tea. I’m grinding my teeth.
It’s tension i feel when i lie to police. Now you tied up in sheets. Homocide in the streets
Red dot…between your eyes with the heat. Now i’m flier than geese.
Toast ya with the roasta. Now you friing like grease.
No denying the beast, I’ll widly feast…on any mc who tries to defeat….
me in the game. You’ll bleed on the paine of the window which i treated with stain.
I’m greedy and vain., deceiving your brain. Words like bullets you’re leaving this game.
Believe i maintain. See i’m insane. Don’t question my skills. Believe i make grade.
See i’m the flame..torching the forest. Goldilocks, her bears, and all of thier porage.
I wander the forest wanting to forage. Souls trapped in coffins, haunting the storage..
facility..where i’m keeping the dead. I’m Grimm,the reaper..reach in your head.
Pull out your brains, eat it like bread. Or meat that we shread…on triscuits with cheese
and pieces of head.

Verse 2:Jigglez
A killa without a conscience spewing gibberish nonsense
to be honest i'm the fucking bomb bitch that's just being modest
I promise to pay homage and drop knowledge
but not the way i dropped out of college
this shit only happens when planets collide
when enemies decide to put their differences aside
when they realize that it's time to ride, I blow up and no one survives
when the general demands that we destroy our lives
as the beat commences i beat common sense into the innocents
you drop your defenses and the suspense is damn near offensive
goons drop kick the door of the hinges, stab you in the neck, chloroform in syringes
they'll steal your riches, kill your bitches, and you end up in ditch needing stiches
Freddy Kruger ya bloody, now that's a wet dream
I'm steady with the ruger while making your ex scream
i take shit to the extreme then i move on to the next scene
Flashing red like a traffic light with infra-red-beams
don't cross me, i don't expect any respect from the rejects just a red dot on the necks
of the subjects that'll make us all suspects, cops can't catch who they can't connect
i'm the kind of shit you only see in your nightmares
look above ya bed, homie, yeah i'm sitting right there
take it word for word, no misquote, what you take this as, some sick joke
i'm pissed off the get go, soon you’ll be sufferin from a slit throat
Murk's got the sweeper and I'll grab the cold heater
and when Grimm comes around he becomes the soul reaper



3rd verse: Grimm
I close my eyes and feel I’m lookin’ through demon eyes.
Screams and cries till I arise. I’m a fiend for lives.
Wether it’s your or mine..it’s always on my mind…
Now my eyes are open but still I’m blind..Satan’s behind
my back as i climb..out of this hole I dug my soul’s revived
But still I’m dead inside yet I feel so alive.
I can’t understand how through your pain I thrive.
But my brain is fried cause I’m sleep deprived.
I’m a zombie, ALL SIN.now I’m stalking…
victims falling fast…police are chalking…
the bodies of the dead cause the devil’s talking..
His voice is in my head now I’m fire walking.
Living amongst flames, fire and brimstone.
Murderous intentions wired in Grimm’s dome.
Last edited by Grim on Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:18 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Nice drop I was really feeling the goldilocks part, you should top it off with some more bars though.

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with all of the -een sounds i would've dropped a charlie sheen line in there. but other than that that was the best shit i've seen in a while lol
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"I close my eyes and feel I’m lookin’ through demon eyes.
Screams and cries till I arise. I’m a fiend for lives.
Wether it’s your or mine..it’s always on my mind…"

THAT'S THAT SHIT I'M TALKIN BOUT NIGGA!!! G-SHIT!!!!! After I read that I knew it was a set up for dat gud shit... keep dat shit up!

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now if we can get a hold of murks verse this will be complete!
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:clap: I was digging this man, the last little bit needs more bars though :clap:
I am the punishment of god.... Had you not Committed great sins, god would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.
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Post by S3V3NTH1RTY »

Nice shit. I really enjoyed the read. Both of you had sick verses...keep dropping. I'm looking forward to the next one.

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Keep it up grimm im looking forward to another drop like this

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Post by Glamtrash »

Nice little collab. The first verse is my favourite. It's dark and ket my interest. You both did well though. Good job.

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