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First Horrocore Verse

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Against a dude named Chameleon aka INK

6 bars, I key'd this up in about 10 minutes or so... More wanting to check out the feed than anything... I hope I can get some feed... Aight...

(I didnt highlight my multi's cuz you should be able to notice them if you really read this shit haha...)



Ayo....

It's surreal, grim, how Ill shed his skin like a Chameleon and act like we still friends, peel him
Back like layers while this steel skims off his forehead til the skull's brim is noticed so we can feel him
Deal kid a hand thats broken, hoping for more than living thru a death this concerted
Its not worth it, and put him thru the pain his mother would feel when she sees her child hurtin!!!
Re-work it, split collarbones til the dollar shows from Dana White and the UFC charter flight promise foes
Honor roll when Im on a roll that ends with an uppercut to disarms this hoe, leaving his eye out the socket hole
Rockets blow, not to just him but his home town, they'll hone now and watch sky clouds get dark from life they've blown down
Dude's bound fold now, stop Ink from flowing with my toast out, how? By putting so many holes in his dome no one knows what's been blown out!!!!
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That Was tight.. perfect for horror core
even if its short it still rips.

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Re: First Horrocore Verse

Post by Defiance »

this was good, more of a battle rap than horror core?? i dont even know what horror core is.. but i dont think this is it... its more like some ICP shit right??
but none the less it was a good read enjoyed the first line about the chameleon and the dana white line.

good shit man, like to see more
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Wasn't true true horrorcore, just hardcore, as stated above. That isn't being said to take away from it, though. A matter of opinion, I guess. Cool flow. Stay up.
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A dope post regardless. Check out my latest stuff.
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Post by S3V3NTH1RTY »

Shit was nice...wouldn't consider it horrorcore though. The flow was caught nice.

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Yeah, its the first one that Ive done, and since have researched it a bit more... But I appreciate all the feed. Thanks!
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