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I'm High Who R u

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I'm intellectual, quick triggered, hot-headed as a firing pistol
I'm sick no drool, rip shreds, leaving bodies with missing heads
swinging like Tarzan, i buzzed some dreads, vines of webs
my preys can't relax, hides get skinned, rhymes instilled within
still searching, for my propose, on this earth, my death won't be worthless
I'ma stay high, chilling in first class service, even if my pockets dry
This blunts got me skipping urges, to flip shit my rage it surges
I nit pick, my veins is purging, hulking up, y'all hurling
little pukes, I'm gunny hartman, here to take the pussy out
and create real men
quit the fucking squealing, its appalling to my appealing
Throwing punches so hard, i bust your chin
breaking everyone of your bones in your skull, times ten
loose cannon, who controls the firing pin
dude ain't even safe in my own fucking skin
let the lesson begin, you always lesser, I'm blessed destined to win
stay fresh, dressed to impress, spray axe, attacked by trucks of women
my bucks screaming FUCK LOVE, as they hit 'em
i want sluts, who down to fuck when they hear the word fuck, I'm hitting
drifting off, crazy's shifting, into a better position
your bitches box, clear is the mission
make her wanna quit marriage and leave the children with him
bitch who the fuck you kidding, ahah

This weeds got me tripping
How you gonna trip when i'm walking on air
puff puff pass, inhale the smoke with no cares
I'm high! Who are you, Is anybody there???!!!!
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Pretty cool, bruh. Some funny punches in there. A nice read. Stay up and keep posting.
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thats badass dude. nice rhymes
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Nice bro, good read, keep it up

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thanks for the feedback dudes
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the rhyme scheme and structure threw me off at first but once i found it this was some tight shit....7/10
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This shit is crazy, almost terrifyingly good. I think i want to have sex with it, but at the same time i fear being raped by it.
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Thanks illa, i put some high work into it

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bump for feed back please
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