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For my kids

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I know it sounds stupid, I know it sounds DUMB, but the only reason I live is for you 3 and MUM/ everything I do, I work my fingers to the BONE, just to make sure Im bringing that money HOME/ I want you to have all the stuff I never DID, cos daddys life was kinda shit as a KID/ we never had no money cos my parents liked to DRINK, I'll never force that on my kids is all I used to THINK/ now I got you 4, my lifes been BLESSED, I'll work every hour god SENDS just to pass this TEST/ promises are something never lightly SPOKEN, but I promise I'll give u all I can, even if it leaves me BROKEN/ I've loved you all so much since I watched you take your first BREATHS, I'll keep grinding for u you all until all that's LEFT is DEATH/ I no longer care bout me, all that matters is you LOT, your my family- my life, your all that I've GOT/

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that was deep man props for writting that not too many written's are that personal but yours is
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You get respect fo this right here family over anything, regardless.

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Safe bro

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That shit was sick bro

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Nice one moneymaker

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