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Defiance
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The Journey

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from start to finish i diminish like its my life sentence
some my presence will be present and ever prevalent
fuck you sentiments it represents whats wrong today
i just want to play along the way and let these songs jus play
im the bomb you say these songs'll slay and enemy in my path
as i slide past these sly cats with more brass than high hats
i fly past flows the model call it die cast never a toy
with clever exploits i measured the void and treasured my voice
with a plethora of noise cause i'm know to cause a raucous
you cant touch us, bustas but yet you cant get enough of us
skills are thunderous here to 1 up all yall playa haters
im mating flavor so catch chu later as i be laying paper
filled with words of a flagrant nature like im in the spice trade
you might say im sharper than a knife blade that'll slice shade
i fight waves with high base from the speakers i'm speaking
keeping my freedom from being a thing for deceiving heathens
i aint leaving with out breaking infact im breaking the bank
you a fish and im shaking the tank and i'm just stating this frank
leaving um vacant in space like buck rogers when he's lost
i de-frost than i de-tox re-up than i swing thought
cause our kings lost to a free toss so im stepping to the plate
to put a weapon to your face so step and get disgraced
cause pesants get erased cause these words are my escape
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Re: The Journey

Post by M33Kish »

Tighten up the multies, (which were on point by the way) but overall nice

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Re: The Journey

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upping^^^^^
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Re: The Journey

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Pretty cool, bruh. I never pay attention to multies when I write or read, so You're cool in that respect. I watch the content. Good flow. It was on point. Stay up.
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Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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