Immortal Platinum *Vs* M33K91 (Topical) (M33K wins 3-2)

Immortal Jav · Post by **Immortal Jav** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:14 am

3 bars
due date: tommorow
-break down votes-
check

M33Kish · Post by **M33Kish** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:16 am

Homework.... check.

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

Immortal Jav · Post by **Immortal Jav** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:17 am

topic assassin hired to kill..

M33Kish · Post by **M33Kish** » Tue Mar 29, 2011 12:00 pm

No need to wait till tomorrow for me I'm good now...

Stalking my prey on a "high" elevation, I sit impatient to make his acquaintance, on this lament occasion,

A short mumbling conversation follows, through my time is short, I allow him to whisper prayers of sorrow,

I press my blade to his throat, no need for the magnum, It slits and I lick the tip, damn I love the taste of platinum.

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

Immortal Jav · Post by **Immortal Jav** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:00 am

My sniper built always trifle,
my employment is the trail.. for this daily survival.
high up From abraham's sitting booth ..my key is to let loose & shoot
hired for the righteous kill.. so i crept in the room..
the conversations of the play i could hear as i start too shoot..
Killed him on aim in the booth...and i aint even John wilkes Booth

Kuhlerblynd · Post by **Kuhlerblynd** » Sat Apr 02, 2011 3:57 pm

Thread cleaned of freeposting and ready for votes.

Immortal Jav · Post by **Immortal Jav** » Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:05 am

Looking For Votes On this One to...

Flowetry · Post by **Flowetry** » Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:23 am

I'd have to give this one to P, M33K that wasn't even 3 bars homie. But Immortals Verse wasn't that much better just P's verse was longer.
MVGT: IP

Grim · Post by **Grim** » Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:04 pm

ok...three lines is not three bars in a text battle..2 lines=1 bar...I also feel that for a topical battle you need more then 3 bars....Now this may seem strange but even with less line's i loooved the approach M33 started and he finished a topical by killing his opponent which was clever and IP using booth three times like that really threw off the rhymes for me and although the JWB reference was ok but played cause it needs to be more creative...i feel this battle should be redone with more bars so you have time to let your story unfold......so even though i may get backlash for this i say MVGT:M33...but really i think this should be redone...and technically IP should get it but i really liked M's ending....nice attempt from both but just not enough bars to tell a story

Alvin · Post by **Alvin** » Mon Apr 11, 2011 1:55 pm

MVGT m33k.

Although neither impressed much, I couldn't fond flow or good rhymes in Javs. Both could have brought better creativity to the table.

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

pest · Post by **pest** » Mon Apr 11, 2011 2:16 pm

Vote Jav...
His shit was more structured and i could catch the flow...
better content to me...

MVGT JAV

M33Kish · Post by **M33Kish** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:17 am

Uppidn

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

Alvin · Post by **Alvin** » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:46 am

-Thread closed & Records Updated-

M33kish wins 3-2

Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical) (M33K wins 3-2)

Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical) (M33K wins 3-2)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Re: Immortal Platinum Vs M33K91 (Topical)

Who is online