Loon E Lou vs. Temp 5 - (Loon E. Lou Wins via TKO)

[Loon E Lou]

Due by sunday night big guy. Check in or kick rocks

If loon e wins, temp 5 gets his status changed from rookie, to illest bitch

If temp wins, loon quits the site

Now all of a sudden its a topical so we need topic ideas!!!!




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[Temp5]

check whats the beat

[Loon E Lou]

temp so battle or topical? last question dawg

[Temp5]

idc jus set something up. im automatically checking to whatever you set up

[Loon E Lou]

Aight here it is. Rules are:

Straight battle

Track must be under 2:30

Use your own beat.

Votes are based on:

Flow
Quality
Mic presence
Punches
Personals

You can NOT post your lyrics.

If thats alright, this us my check
Check

Lets have this due by sunday night. Unless you need a lil more time

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-- Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:06 pm --

as in march 27th

[Loon E Lou]

ok man. HERE IS THE BEAT. check in and lets get it rollin

check

[Temp5]

check

[Loon E Lou]

Ill be droppin tonight by midnight my time

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[Temp5]

Gimme a day

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[Loon E Lou]

im droppin tonight regardless


since your gonna post yours

v1.

Its time to let it go, this is the final cut for this mutt,
imma teach him exactly what happens when you happen to,
get in my way its judgement day so time to terminate.
this virgin aint ready to bust, so its a must i crush his vertibrae/
Faker than toupe's, this fugazi, dude hatin.
well, i would too if i was from NY and had no game.
Im bout to knock this dude off beat like all his verses.
matter fact, i heard your track, do you even know what a verse is?/
first is, me. well, you got me by a nose.
takin pictures in the mirror, what r u? sometype of hoe?
Singin hooks an shit, dawg, you really need to quit.
your nowhere near the strike zone...you have no pitch./
so step back before you get, stepped on.
your a kid that not even R Kelly would piss on.
fuck is wrong with you dawg? your a lame with no game.
better hold on to your hat, cus imma bout to make the lyrics rain down, its on!

Hook.

This dude dont really want it. he just another bitch.
a passer by thats about to get a big taste of this.
kill em, cut em up like Beni Hana's im a master chef.
Fuckin devour this pussy until theres nothin left X2

v2.

No wonder people sleepin on you dawg, your fuckin soft.
even your name lets us know that you wont be here too long.
this is the type of track that ruins careers.
you wanna battle face to face, but all i see's your nose and ears./
you urkle looking mo' fucker, step your game up.
your just a school boy, dont be tryna play tough.
or get exposed like titties at rock shows.
you stand in front of the mirror. WHY?! to catch the right pose!/
man thats bitch, and you know it is.
you droppin tracks in the booth, but nobody notices.
this dude a hallmark, its time for me to fold this kid.
the only time he looks hard, is when he's focusin/
let me focus in. and bring the truth to the light.
Will Barksdale, your death is tonight.
i hope ya balls dropped, cus this'll be the test of ya life,
so buh bye temp, its time to go to bed, GOODNIGHT!

-- Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:36 am --

you better drop!!!!

[Loon E Lou]

Where u at dawg

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[Temp5]

Loon e Lou, ha his name seems to fit
Cause Lou is the perfect name for a bitch
Come on loon , I'm known to down a screwball quick
But not even a drunk is down for this goofball shit

I don't even kno y we battlin I should jus laugh at u
Ur rappin is sin sound like eve ate ya atoms apple

prob looney off crack, u dont kno drugs r bad
U livin proof of that, didn't u learn from mom nd dad
U a has been rapper, clinging to times u had
Man Wats goin through his noodle, his ramen/rhymin bad

Tlkin big shit well typical of small guys
But Like visibility I'll hit a nigga wit 4 i's
U mad? boilin under the skin
But u kno imma win
cause temp got a flow that can cure hives

I heard u good around a hoe, but u don't get those
Cause ur life is the only time that a birch blows

He playin games behind a pc loon is doomed
I make real melodies you make looney tunes
Illestlyrics site is sick, but loon immune
Quit the site so real rap can soon resume

Everybody on this site we should throw a fiesta,
after i put little Lou to sleep like a siesta.
U don't understand? well que tal esta
U See, even in ur language I'll wreck ya

U really tryna beef critique me on a microphone?
I'd rather sound monotone then 12 when I'm all grown nd live wit my mom at home
sound like u chokin on some kind of bone,
suck too much dick Nd I think u swallowed a condom Holmes

I can sense u nervous ya hands r shakin
Or is that symptoms of a retorted lookin cancer patient
Ur future's wit the only girl u ever had
but if she bad bet I'll bag nd shell leave u nd ya plans gapin
Ya lyrics don't compare so y u nd ya mans hatin
My punches'll put u in the land since u into landscaping
Prayin you'll blow one day? Well I hope that u can stand waitin
I ain't god but I kno u won't make it in this damnation

He playin games behind a pc loon is doomed
I make real melodies you make looney tunes
Illestlyrics site is sick but loon immune
Quit the site so real rap can soon resume



Sent from my iPod


http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7944909

-- Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:44 pm --

Didnt bother to mix or anything so sorry for any inconviences

[Grim]

Flow=Temp(sounded smoother)
Quality=Loon
Mic presence=both equal confidence=tie
Punches=slight edge to loon
Personals=slight edge to Temp.

The categories were even...but i truly think temps second verse did it for me..i had edge to loon until temps second verse...the cancer patient line got me for temp but loons play on temp being temporary had me going too..
No dick riding even though i'm boys with temp...although loon sounded more like a battle the personal punch temp used i mentioned got it..

I would say tie but if i have to pick i give a sliiight edge to temp.

If you don't count my vote that's cool..i know you shouldn't vote on a crew member but this was such a good one for me i had to comment...loon and temp you both went it...respect to both ya'll...respect

[Immortal Jav]

Quality: Loon
Punchlines:loon
Personal's: temp
flow:loon

i feel loon won by a hair
good battle @ both of ya

[Temp5]

Quality is not a category nd if loon loses he jus gets a loss not leave yhe site

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