32NEILZ vs GRIMM pt.2

[Grim]

no flipping or rebuttles..48 hours..1 round...6 bars(12 lines)judge on personals, punches, wordplay, flow...good luck

[32neilz]

Check check

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[Grim]

We both have punches..my come in larger proportions.
The second your parents had you they were all for abortion.
Neilz's an awful contortion of what a man's supposed to be.
I'll use a tube of frozen meat and smash both rows of teeth...
That "32" possesses and leave'em laying with two broken cheeks.
You think you're ill I must be toxic..you don't want a dose of me.
Priests couldn't excercise this demon with holy water and rosaries.
I ain't talking confrontation when I say Neilz wants loads of beef.
He's in to animalistic sex with toads and sheep.
And won't except money from fag mags...he'll pose for free.
He's got a hoe's perception and's like two phones with "no reception"...
When he raps for the masses cause there's "no connection".

[Trizz]

loved readin it ! Grimm went hard,no doubt. The battle's lookin one sided. Lol. No, i shouldnt comment before readin neilz's verse.

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[32neilz]

The shit 32neilz spits is combined with chemical FUSION, beat me?, Grimm, ur livin an ILLUSION/

Sneak up behind, stab and SLASH YA, grab the bronze knuckles, CRASH and SMASH YA/

This guys a fuckin LAUGHING STOCK, probably loves to BATH IN juice from COCK, neilz'll never STOP/

I'll REARRANGE YA, with a shot from the CHAMBER, drown ya in ur own GORE, this is WAR/

This is a battle u wish u never STARTED, u get guided by ur namesake(grimm reaper) to the land of the DEPARTED/

I spit fire, that statement can be TRUSTED, weild a mic that's jewel ENCRUSTED, Grimm gets DUSTED/

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-- Sat Mar 26, 2011 1:19 am --

Callin for votes

[M33Kish]

Dayum gud gud shit but I give neilz diz

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[32neilz]

Safe uppin for more

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-- Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:29 am --

M33k91 bro u need to break it down into the catagories listed above or the vote won't count, those are the rules and I have to stick to what was agreed before I checked in

[b215crazy]

Grimm wins

[32neilz]

U need to break it down man, voting don't work like that

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[M33Kish]

my bad

Personals-Neilz (not too many personals on either but neilz focused on the grim aspect of grimm)
Punches-grimm (but that's just cause grimm ends his linez wit a "Haha" errytime, he's consistent)
Wordplay-grimm (he's just sick wit it-
Flow-neilz (i was followin dat shit and feelin it tuff)

So now dat I look a 2nd I kinda could see a tie but off back I gotta say grimm did rip dat shit and 32 shot it to death.

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[32neilz]

So ur vote is for?

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[M33Kish]

32 lyk before I was just saying it was a nice battle.

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[Elite Punisher]

Yo you guys should not let your crew vote on this it seems unfair
but i had to give it to 32 neilz

-- Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:16 pm --

ill break it down latter lol

[Alvin]

Punches=1
Personals=1
Wordplay=1
Flow=1
total if your counting impaired: 4

Grimm

We both have punches..my come in larger proportions.
The second your parents had you they were all for abortion.
punch/.5, flow/1, 1.5/4. ok, it flowed, but its not personal nor very fresh, which takes away from a punch.
Neilz's an awful contortion of what a man's supposed to be.
I'll use a tube of frozen meat and smash both rows of teeth...
Flow/1, punch=.5, 1.5/4. Again, set up had really nothing to do with the punch. Hes "awfully" flexible in comparison to what a man should be? So ima hit him with a bar of meat
That "32" possesses and leave'em laying with two broken cheeks.
You think you're ill I must be toxic..you don't want a dose of me.
punch/.5, wordplay/.5, 1/4. The first line reads un natural. Nice to see evidence of word play, but again, its extremely played. I also don't make sense of what 32 has to do with being possessed.
Priests couldn't excercise this demon with holy water and rosaries.
I ain't talking confrontation when I say Neilz wants loads of beef.
flow/1. 1/4. who are you battling? again the set up had nothing to do with the punch, no personals, im not even counting that as wordplay.
He's in to animalistic sex with toads and sheep.
And won't except money from fag mags...he'll pose for free.
0.
He's got a hoe's perception and's like two phones with "no reception"...
When he raps for the masses cause there's "no connection".
Punch/1. 1/4. If wording was better, it'd be a very nice line, prolly your best. But your entire battle is too open. Remove the times you said his name, and fill in the blank with some one elses name type of verse. NO name flips, weak wordplay, no personals, set ups lacked for the punch. All in all you score 6/24. Not very good.

32Neilz

The shit 32neilz spits is combined with chemical FUSION, beat me?, Grimm, ur livin an ILLUSION/

Sneak up behind, stab and SLASH YA, grab the bronze knuckles, CRASH and SMASH YA/

This guys a fuckin LAUGHING STOCK, probably loves to BATH IN juice from COCK, neilz'll never STOP/

I'll REARRANGE YA, with a shot from the CHAMBER, drown ya in ur own GORE, this is WAR/

This is a battle u wish u never STARTED, u get guided by ur namesake(grimm reaper) to the land of the DEPARTED/

I spit fire, that statement can be TRUSTED, weild a mic that's jewel ENCRUSTED, Grimm gets DUSTED/
Youre bars are set up differently than im accustomed. I seen a trace of name play, rhyme scheme was ok, but learn to understand the rules i guess. You guys should battle again and this time battle each other... with the same bar length. lol

MVGT to Grimm.

Both of you should focus more on battling each other, most if not all the punches read open as all hell. As for the votes, stop dick riding, shits not cool. Be honest with people, its the only way we'll improve. Good luck on round 3.

[pest]

personals 32
punches grimm
wordplay grim
flow grim

It was a hott battle but grimm prevailed in most catagories so ima go with grim... shit was fire....

V=Grimm

EDIT: AND IF YOU TWO COULD VOTE ON THE BATTLE I GOT GOING WITH M33K91 THATD BE SIKK! NOT ASKING FOR A VOTE FOR ME... JUSTA VOTE IN GENERAL ON THE BATTLE