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English verses

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So this is my second one here on illestlyrics, hope you guys like it.


I say mic check like one two three.
Last time I did many things it was dirty.
Stepped in the holy water, now I'm clean.
Thanks for the advice, now I'm clean.
Did stupid things, but now gonna change.
Back in the days, I always had an rage.
I didn't appreciate live I ain't worth it.
Didn't make anything of it.
I also didn't even fight for it.
Always felt lonely and freaking ill
Couldn't even pay my  cheapest bills.
But I want to go for it, improve myself.
Don't be afraid to show it, I'm not selfish.
I want to make career, not selling fish.
I hope I can do that, and give love to my kids.

I say mic check like one two three.
I was mentally down I couldn't look at me.
It was like a blind men I  couldnt even see.
But someone told me, yesterday is yesterday.
An today is today, make the best of the days.
That's an pretty good advice, keep it in mind.
So nowadays my mood is kind, judge right.
And that all comes because of that one guy.
Oh and also hiphop too, it's 24/7 in my mind.
Allday playing with all those nice rhymes.
Making the ultimate multi's and lines.
Yea I cleansed myself now I'm clean.
Choose the right path you know what I mean.
Choose for god, holy spirit and the disciples.
Don't look to the wrong side just choose the bible.
Don't lose yourself to the devil and other evil demons.

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Re: English verses

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Don't know about this man, too basic i think everyone has to start somewhere though right, i just wasnt feeling the first verse, the second verse was better, though this did seem like more of a poem than a rap i have to be honest, but keep dropping man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: English verses

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I know! For me it was like I made something nice.
But that's because I come from the netherlands and English is a foreign.
So I can't just put everything on paper, but in my own language I can without thinking.
But you know better, and I will keep improving my English rhymes.
Thx!

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yeah too basic but it flowed clean and it sounded alright
but it wasnt bad so keep doing youre thing
Straight through your abdomen unraveling @ the speed of a javelin
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