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Why isn't the human race progressing faster than technology has
Smart black men sent to prison
the world will never know how much knowledge he has
Violence speed fast towards these victims
they are so innocent, They were so diligent
Government dont want to take the computers from the community
We use to have so much unity
Now it seems these webcam secret spys are filming me
Watching our every move
Unfortunately they going to win we going to lose
Everyone are just a bunch of fools
We don't even see what's coming
The finish line is that way,You better start running
But they don't believe me
Babies being born crying saying momma don't conceive me
Crazy world we living in
On my laptop for hours
searching for answers that's already been giving
then we pretend everyone on the internet is our friend
we don't know where to start don't know where to begin
all so confused & amused at things that's not even important
We being misused.. Lifes a horrible court case we all being accused
mostly mislead, MLK had a dream but they say not in this bed
looking for happiness they lie & say this way
then we follow.. So I say fuck the world & I hope she swallow
but we swallow our pride but die without our self dignity
they stealing our souls & that's not just a conspiracy
are yall happy by curiosity
they hate us to be smart, Such a animosity
technology is dumbing us down
we all looking like clowns
everythings on the internet now
we all losing our intellect now
Old people smile,laughing & sad at what's going on
I meet a girl on facebook asked if she logging on
We on worrying about facebook
When they took I mean taking our dreams & brains
Just mistaken & going insane
& the technology and the people are who to blame
Last edited by Darryl_Spacely on Sun Mar 20, 2011 3:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by thadevious1 »

Darryl_Spacely wrote: Government should take the computers from the community
after this line you can scrap your whole verse
the government is what is wrong with the world
why do you want them to help you kill yourself faster
without ppl discussing about the info they have
te world would crumble in on it self much faster

my advise is to scrap this line
cause the rest of your verse makes better sense without it

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Post by Darryl_Spacely »

lol u was right. but i just fixed that line
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