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Mental Acuteness

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When I start a session, the sparks reflection
is like an angel in the dark, a mark from heaven
with his wings spread apart
to guard my blessings
I was tested, taught life's hardest lessons
still guessing on its greatest questions
the new testament is sacred
but its an excessive list of ancient
basic etiquettes unless its repressiveness to an omnipresent
monster, then its genesis
if you attack the scripts, its blasphemous
Ruckus is the good catholic, Plex is the baptist
a bastard, the reverent Jesuits
come after the hesitant on sedatives
their leverage is psychedelic drugs
hell is down, but its up to the devil to judge
rebels without cause, bringing together society
I could get off from the pleasure of irony
whether the piety is to a rapper or God
they are both after the job, master of fraud
Pat Robertson or Rick Ross
I hope the shit stops
this drop is an offering to hip hop
I take a Klonopin, have sick thoughts
drift off, in a dream that is essentially worthless
like mental alertness
which means,conscientiousness, the instrumental is perfect
as is the tempo of verses
thoughts assemble like churches
the evolution is accidental
but it was meant for a purpose
so at the end of the day, it was potentially worth it
the energies work with atoms,then our sent to the circuit
reversing space & time
the stars a lign, life is eventually perfect
the entity reveals his empowered mission
we doubt his vision
there are a trillion more Gods in the outer limits
but this time, we are out of minutes
it sounds religious, I'm just feeling under stress
cuz if I'm far from my best
that means these MC's bars, are catastrophes
lacking capacity like apaches
imagine these planes crashing in the black seas
I'm that much on fire, ash me
Packi's can blast me with an atomic bomb
I'd still be the illest MC, I have been all along
read a passage from the quran, I'm islamic
like Obama is, this is a mixed sonnet
nautilus, paranoid like I hit cronic
bong rips monstrous, fuck u puppets and comics
this would only be more sick if ruckus was on it
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Re: Mental Acuteness

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This was refreshing man, the mutlies were just like you, but the layout and the flow were new, i suppose thats what you went for was an impressive drop though, you had the vocabulary, the lines in between the lines that set up the rhyme were a dope idea you really did well with this piece man, glad to see you're still rocking this plex
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Mental Acuteness

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yeah gottta say this was a solid drop, multis were on it. me and ur styles are alot a like got them multi syllable drops like me, which is my favorite form a lyricism and thus harder to write. but it was a good piece man. surprised you aint got much feed!!!

but none the less man, i was feeling it.
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Re: Mental Acuteness

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that means these MC's bars, are catastrophes
lacking capacity like apaches
imagine these planes crashing in the black seas
I'm that much on fire, ash me

great lines here really has some niiiice imagery the rest was great i could never do that kind of multi syllabic wordplay... without a rhyming dictionary :oops:
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