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Feel the heat of my breath, as I beat on my chest
Devil possessed, givin’ me fire, quite the blessed guest,
Admired pest, his request arrests my very soul’s desire
Impressed with several 6’s which attest that I acquired
The beast, who’s released, off the crease of these lines
Which I unfold in your mind, leaving a permanent sign
Intertwined with revelations,
fate aligned with constellations, your facin’
the dawn of the spawn of Satan.
To control your soul was the goal from the start
That never drifted apart, we just re-shifted the art
Casting ourselves in the light, while you were left in the dark
When In the passing of night, you were given the mark.
I’m on the level of the devil, come and revel my powers
the fall of man began after the fall of several towers
the hours are fading fast to your last days
And you won’t outlast cause of your past ways
D’evils got you now, let it baste in your praise.

This life so wicked, subconsciously I picked it
An anomaly to harmony mathematically predicted
In the holy book scripted, in the system left encrypted
Only to be foretold by the prophets, saints, and mystics
It’s the deceiver weaver, dead non believer soul retriever,
The grim reaper who will keep ya with the late sleepers
Seekers, looking for the eye of a secret
I promised peace but the beast knew I couldn’t keep it
So integrate it’s not too late to meet it
Sow your fate, watch it grow, so I can go and reap it,
See your asleep wit, no intention to awake
Thought I’d share the stakes, not to mention your mistakes
Even God himself can’t shake you up with the quakes
could never break through to you,
You always listened to the snake
D’evils got you now, and your soul to take
-- Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:52 pm --

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-- Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:00 pm --

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that was ill yo, i loved the concept keep droppin man
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Nice! I love readin' your posts.
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now i know your flows ILLA and for you this was weak with multies but the concept and content were tight...you could make a few lines hit harder but you know i like your style....it could use more complexity to your lines but i like the simple and to the point flow...favorite lines........
intertwined with revelations,
fate aligned with constellations, your facin’
the dawn of the spawn of Satan.
This life so wicked, subconsciously I picked it
An anomaly to harmony mathematically predicted
In the holy book scripted, in the system left encrypted
Only to be foretold by the prophets, saints, and mystics
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personally i think this is dope
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