What do you think?

[Flowetry]

Quick Freestyle: Deflating Minds, with a pen used for Creating Rhymes, and Dating Times, of my next battle against Hating Mimes.
Stratigacally the Best Around, I Couress the Crown, no need to Address Clowns, in this Pest Town.
Each stanza is Something New, I am single-handly Corrupting Crews, and Adsusting Rules, no need for Busting Tools..
Because I am the human Hand Gun, my rhymes are a commodity on high-Demmand Son, and your scripts are nothing but Damn Puns, looks like your gibberish was wrote in a Crayola Crayon Bum.
I will end this on some Wordplay Kid, you hate to relay hate just Say It, Pay the rate away for Gay Kids, n mace the face with grace wish you Portrayed It?

[Elite Punisher]

Good Freestyle A lot Of Multi's Used Great Work It Flows Great../