eLmo - Punk Rock Freestyle

[eLmo]

Here is my latest piece

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-p ... -freestyle


Reference:

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/anywh ... ml#p164260

[Loon E Lou]

Aight man, beats dope. You got a mad consistant flow jus iunno. Real mono tone so regardless of what ur spitting, it all sounds the same throughout. Maybe some emotion or a switch up during the flow would keep it more interesting. Other than that tho, looks like u kno what ur doin. I wish i could quote sumtn but like i mentioned, it all kinda jus sounds the same. This the only track ive been able to feed in a bit so im not disappointed on clickin urs first. Keep it hot mayne

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[Sentus]

Well I deffinitely wasn't expecting to hear that lol. Your flow and lyrics were dope but the delivery wasn't really my cup of tea. I couldn't understand you sometimes and it didn't really match the beat that much. Keep it up though

[Defiance]

the flow was off but quite interesting, like the song though, kind of an odd style you got tho.. keep um coming

[Elite Punisher]

that beat was Dope Punk Rock!!

-- Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:13 am --

that beat was Dope Punk Rock!!

[Kause mc]

You know what? Im sure you know who warren G is. His style would suite you down to the socks! I can see potential bro keep this up but switch your delivery up. Very true bout the monotone thing but hey thats easily fixed. Keep doin ur thing man

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[The Hand of God]

there were a bunch of times where i couldn't understand what you were saying

like, you'd not annunciate words or you'd try to jam a bunch into a line