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The Prosecutor of greed, causing intensive havoc like i was chucky's seed/
ill infest like an insect, the inception, multiple's of soul's get harvested and resurrected/
this is an obscene Creepfest/
the Vulture's eye is my keen eye, stories from the black book try and reenact these lines/
key eyesight, the big bang theory cant spark my light/

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flo=decent,vocab=nice,structure=could have been better=punches=kinda of played but still used well,over all I would like to see more but this was cool not even really enough for someone to really feed any decent feed on but I would def say keep posting...

****also need to feed 2 pieces before you post..your threads can get locked for it
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while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
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