Darkness

[MonuMental]

My soul's gone, my new eyes are sickened by the sight,
Dark wings and dark winds cut out the candle light,
But blind eyes don't realize the coming of the night,
And death cries with dead eyes in hunger of a life,
You can stand fast and fight, and die living by the knife,
Or you can flee and be cowardly cause you never saw the scythe,
The fact is, when blood spatter's mixed with brain matter,
The final answer is growth impeded and life shattered,
That's another life gone, a mother's pain that didn't matter,
A soul lost to hell that will suffer forever after,
A demon in you tearing your soul to utter tatters,
His fist trained to leave you insane after it batters,
A madness digging deeply at the base of your skull,
How could eyes so full of life grow so dead and so dull,
How could a life become a price meant to pay you in full,
How can you scoop out a person and then be left with a hull,
How can screams put you to sleep like insanity's lull,
How can you dive for the fire without a push or a pull,
I surmise your mind is lost in the grips of a dream,
Where the demons that you battle are as real as they seem,
And the blood you dream of spilling robs the gold of it's gleam,
And the guts you dream of spilling warm your heart in the steam,
And I hope that you've forgiven everyone that was green,
Just pull the trigger and forever be done with the cut scenes.

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[FatalX]

Dude I really like your style.....I wish that you would in addition to your normal format add some inner multi's...check the rap 101 if you dont know what it is...it could give your whole scheme a stronger sense of flow dude...as far as your vocab bad ass as always....I am seeing your talent enhancing the more you post...you should try battling it will help... personally I find that battleing cna really enhance an emcees perspective on his writtens all the way around....keep posting

-- Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:09 pm --

also...the pics you paint are becomeing more vivid

[Elite Punisher]

hella good read, hella good words, a+ keep it up