glimpse(old ish)

[FatalX]

When you seek the epitomy of life,it's called the ART.......of LIVING//
not far from different,but the words I've written are SCARRED....from SCHISMS//
...I IMPART.....the WISDOM,----->SHARDS......of VISIONS//
which where lost to this earth,by men who where cursed through the HEART...of GIVING//
so it's hard....to mention,.....when you see through the eyes of a PROPHET//
that this world and all its glory,is just an IMAGE that we've CONCOCTED//
a SYSTEM.....filled with OPTIONS,-->FEAR....and NO CAUTION//
as mirrors menace and mimic gimics,REFLECTING TERRORS TOXINS//
its APPARANT....we are HOSTAGE,to this REALM that we've CREATED//
Built this NIGHTMARE out of DREAMS,If this is HELL....then we MADE IT//
we FAILED....yet we PRAISE IT,like BABYLON in its GREATNESS//
we FASTEN on the FACES,then we PASS it ON as RAPIST//
Its CATCHING ON->CONTAGIOUS,....each ACT is DAWNED with HATRED//
....SLACKJAWS call us SADIST,....we are all in FACT ILL FATED//
The RAPTURE....WILL EMBRACE THIS,with CATASTROPHIC CHANGES//
don't LAUGH it OFF just FACE IT,WE are in the AGE OF AGES//

　Capitalizatoin=emphasis
.....=pause in breath
---->=on to the point
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[JiMMyJaM080691991]

pretty dope some of your flow seems a little off but maybe thats cos im just reading it from text might sound good outloud.

[supersonic killa]

dopest ish i swear its so dope i can bag it and sell it
and if you dont get what hes saying then your kinda dumb
the best free i came across so far......

[Lil Meika]

damn bro yhu kilt dhat shit made me take a second look at life but some were big words that i dont know lol but yhus a beast

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[QwarterZ]

After reading the first piece and seeing the same idea tossed around
I think I get the vibe more on this one
which makes it more...evident and more emotional
it sticks out to me a bit more
I like the style when I get the idea of it though
and really feel what your saying...
as I said in your other piece...this would make a nice track
keep writing my dude!

[Duke]

Even the way it's enunciated in text form, you can hear it being said. Kind of reminds me of Slug from Atmosphere, and not in a bad way.