Recline Back

[QwarterZ]

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLM2fE1KJj4[/video]
Jealousy mixes in with hennesy, poured to remember me
collectively filled in the box next to Ryan Reynolds
eyin' ten folds, stack of papers, clips and memories
carved out of tendencies, dope dealers with iron shovels
bury thee enemies, live free of anything acceptin' me
now keep the status quo, and live where all foul rappers go
none know their manners, no, eating up my own famished flow
as my skeleton seems to decompose, but still repeats its soul
as it climbs out the casket, rap bastards, shall stand staggered
with a band gathered around the neck that's snapped backwards
thanx to a heavy chain, a steady brain, swangin' on high rims
silence...they arrive after my prime hits, sliced like prime ribs
rock like primus, while my premise is to open my eyelids
I do dirt like hikers, pick at my coldness like reachin' in ur sinus
flick it back in, find it like miners, see where I is
is enlightened, so my light is twisted upon the skyline kid
scarin' em like the vatican, or maybe I'm really just losin' em
I keep my distance while abusin' em, then buzz of a-muse-a-ment
park when I ride, the lights fly high, I'm over Jerusalem
the illest when pressured, but no pressure, just a trend setter
while views get lesser, they bring out Kim Kardashian in a pair of skechers
nah...nevermind that...I ain't even goin' at these blind cats
so I might aswell recline back, just tryna bring them rhymes back

[FatalX]

you started out a little more complex then when you ended...I can see how you put alot of thought in the beginning and eventually just let the verse flow where it wanted to go...the beginning felt forced to me...good job wit the vocab...punches were ok...flow and structure pretty solid...
*also its kind of late and im tired so I was a little aggrivated at trying to read this....cometimes its best to just be easy with it you knw good drop though looking forward to more

[JiMMyJaM080691991]

seems a little slack to me.