Seanny T vs. Fatal X

[FatalX]

4 bars
house rules
you post first
due asap 3 day limit

[Seanny T]

K one question...house rules?

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[Seanny T]

Aight, here we go!:
Fatalx they call me seansta monsta cuz I come at you like a demon,
Once I'm thru with ur sorry ass u will be left Screamin,
Im like a hydra on the attack, i come at u from 3 sides,
Like lions among lambs I lead the prides,
U Allied with that dumbass whose named yezzir,
Is he a fuckin flaming faggot? Yessir!
I don't know why you wanted to vs me,
I'm no rook you punk, I'm as epic as can be

I think that's what u meant by 4 bars, right? 2 lines is a bar? Idk iv heard that b4 so that's what I based it on, hope that's all good haha

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[FatalX]

Do you know "WHAT TIME IT IS?",or do I need to get the CALENDER
I didn't Se any Thing WORTHY,for you to call yourself a "CHALLENGER"//

See your raps where STILL-BORN,before the Ideas where CONCIEVED
that means Im not here to bring DEATH,Im a FLESH EATING DISEASE//

I HEX BLEEDING EMCEE's,my very PRESENCE is a CURSE
see you know when someones good,when you feel THREATENED by a VERSE//

Theres no CONCEALING when it HURTS,yeah I knew you where my VICTIM,
Especially when your parents cut you off from this INTERNETS DIMENSION//

-- Wed Mar 02, 2011 1:04 am --

that second line is supposed to be written like this
I didn't Se any Thing worthy for you call your self a CHALLENGER

[Seanny T]

Anyone gunna vote?!

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[Quix]

Fatalx they call me seansta monsta cuz I come at you like a demon,
Once I'm thru with ur sorry ass u will be left Screamin,

Not feeling this bar ^ very basic and not hard hitting

Im like a hydra on the attack, i come at u from 3 sides,
Like lions among lambs I lead the prides,

umm no!

U Allied with that dumbass whose named yezzir,
Is he a fuckin flaming faggot? Yessir!

meh, nice attempt at a personal...

I don't know why you wanted to vs me,
I'm no rook you punk, I'm as epic as can be


not a good finisher




o you know "WHAT TIME IT IS?",or do I need to get the CALENDER
I didn't Se any Thing WORTHY,for you to call yourself a "CHALLENGER"//

not bad man

See your raps where STILL-BORN,before the Ideas where CONCIEVED
that means Im not here to bring DEATH,Im a FLESH EATING DISEASE//

wasn't feeling this

I HEX BLEEDING EMCEE's,my very PRESENCE is a CURSE
see you know when someones good,when you feel THREATENED by a VERSE//

wasn't directed at him ... good concept ... bad execution

Theres no CONCEALING when it HURTS,yeah I knew you where my VICTIM,
Especially when your parents cut you off from this INTERNETS DIMENSION//

not a good finsiher



you both need to work on directing your punches at your opponent more/better. try to come a bit more copmplex to ... a lot of the concepts you used i've seen a lot .


VOTE: Fatal

[Elite Punisher]

it was a good challenge but up by both sides
but fatal surpassed a little bit more than seanny t
vote fatal

[FatalX]

STILL BORN=when a child is born dead....for those of you who dont know

[Omnie]

Close this ish too...

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