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[JiMMyJaM080691991]

more bars making up as i go along

im the illest kid around the town you going down/
i found that im profound rhymes make ya head spin aound/
my rhymes are metaphysical, riddles i hit the pinnacle/
so intregal almost phyisical yet people so cynical/
what are you retaded as slow as molasses/
you cant see past this you needing some glasses/
and when hearing my passage your mind implodes/
cos im dopping lyrical bombs my rhymes explode/
doesnt matter where im from or where i decicide to go/
doesnt matter where ive gone, been through the ice and the snow/
been through the flames and the fire but still stay on my grind/
how u thik i stay so hot and so cold at the same time/
im hotter than a star u know i shed the light/
its bright but ehn im gone there will be no sunshine/