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movie collection, part 1

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rite im going to drop some verses about movies from the characters prospectives, fort this could be cool to see how it goes. im gunna leave titles out tho and let you figure out, what movie its from. this ones easy tho.


summer time, camp crystal lake, a fun time/
what a buzz, our hearts racing an' sublime//
till that day at camp, i got dunked and drowned/
by the same bullies, i always got clowned//
my mother hard grafting feeding the kids/
pay back she demanded, till hell forbids//
so five years later, new councilers arive/
who had to survive, if they wanted out alive//
my mother a vixen, let them have time to mix in/
just waiting for time when pay back could be given//

later that night the killing started/
people massacred, limbs departed//
tearing through the camp on a wiked rage/
in no way i condone females to behave//
but the last girl, just refused to die/
she was afraid, but not to look in her eyes//
tryed to escape but she didnt now how/
went to row, but my mother wudnt allow//
the girl saw no option, machete out screaming/
against the dark trees the blade was gleaming//
took one big swing and she hit, tearing straight/
frew her neck, her jugular split, her head decapate/
then her body fell silent into the black of night/
a lifeless soul, skin pale and white//

now a decade later, my lifeless souls walks again/
top of the food chain when it come to givin out pain//
camp crystal lake's had a name change, camp blood/
ironic as its the place where these cabins once stood/
but its now inhabited by more young beings/
all awstruck by the sights there seeing//
exspeshily by my big machete, that drops jaws/
and bodys, when the blood splatter covers the walls//
got a sack on my head, coz i aint yet found that hockey mask/
but can now bask in glory, as ive now finished my task//
iv gained revenge, but also the taste for murder/
it was an easy task for me, jason V the quick learner//
ill go now go back in hinding till the time is here/
when i can rise, il' walk again an' just strike fear//
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I like what you're doing. It's a dope concept. It seems fresh and new to me. As for the actual writing, the only thing I'd say is watch your spelling, bruh. Words
like "exspeshily"(especially) will turn some folks off from the wole piece. Pretty cool, all in all. Good read. Stay up.
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thanks for the feed monu
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haha, i dont know what movie this is, but the read is nice. I like how you actually drew up the entire plot for the most part, creating a movie/story for those of us who have yet to see it. Im likeing the switch up in topic as well. Lets hear more movies you english bastard.
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Nice play on a classic movie dude
I was feeling it, its like you unraveled the script
and really just ran with the whole concept
which makes this whole thing that much more better
sick stuff though...lol..
I don't have much to say..I'm impressed u kept the topic going
can't wait to see the rest of the collection
I'm not going to say the title of this though so :p
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