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ShysT - No Hope ( Provokin Tha Dopest )

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Alvin
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Re: ShysT - No Hope ( Provokin Tha Dopest )

Post by Alvin »

Eh, delivery is pretty good, kinda gets dull after a while, repetitive. Cuban link over here lol. Sounds pretty good, first i was skeptical, beat threw me off a lil. Id like to hear a couple drops and highs, maybe flippin slow flow to fast with the vocab, would sound dope. Sounds good as it is, but its all rather repetitive, like same rhythm over and over. But thats me being a dick, i like the switch up on the 3rd verse. Good drop man, keep droppin.
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Re: ShysT - No Hope ( Provokin Tha Dopest )

Post by Defiance »

yeah i agree with P D that shit does sound repetive no change up or anything..
but besides from that, dope drop... i think the beat was perfect for your style. good shit man

but try and switch your style a lil, so it doesnt just drone and drone.. but again its probably just the beat

i like it though good shit
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Post by Sentus »

I thougt the beat was great lol, anything backed by Vinnie Paz is dope. I thought your flow and lyrics were amazing. You are a very good rapper. Your voice sounded kind of dry and boring though, try to put some more energy in it.
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