SacredVerse vs Orfadox (Topical Battle)

[NoVeL]

MVGT to SacredVerse

I just felt he had more of an edge due to the fact it was easier to follow, although Orfadox was pretty descriptive himself. It was pretty close. Dope battle.

[Orfadox]

Fuck It Il Accept That Vote Doesnt Seem To Many Rushing To Vote


2-2

[Noctoural88]

Creativity-tie
Relevance-tie, both on point throughout
Complexity-sacred by a longshot
Flow-sacred slightly, it seemed audio geared


vote- SacredVerse

he just had the more well-rounded and complex verse. props to both

[FatalX]

like the others said both where creative
creativity=even
structure=orfadox
flow=sacred
complexity=orfadox

really I am going to have to give my vote to Sacred....his verse captivated me with the whole first person imagery and emotion....I just see it as a more relatable piece

vote-Sacred

[SacredVerse]

4-3 (?) me, uppin to end this!

[Omnie]

Would've liked to break this down, but I'm usually always on here on my phone...anyways...

Creativity: Sacred took this...I still gotta give Orf props cuz creativity is still needed to write a topical, but Orf's was more to the point, where as Sacred is reliving it in a dream

Relevance: Tie

Complexity: Orf...better vocab...wasn't feeling "kicks" and "ice" mentioned in Sacred's verse...some basic lines...

Flow: I think Sacred had more multies, but there were some areas where I couldn't keep the flow going. So I gotta give this cat to Orf. His verse, I read a lil more smoothly...props to both though

Overall: Orf gets the win, but it was a close battle...I really enjoyed reading both pieces

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-- Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:50 am --

Now, close this ish...