Nep vs Deception Topical (Nep wins KO)

[king nep]

72hour
house rules

8bars each g/l DC

[Deception]

5 bars for a topical? ok this dont sound hard, check

[king nep]

we can make it more i've extended it to 8bars each u good?

[Deception]

woke up dreary eyed with this pain in my brain/
like a virus filled computer, memorys hard to obtain//
so i leap out of bed in this unusual enviroment/
with sun blazing down i stop and just pause for a moment//
run to the bathroom, brush my face with cold water/
but my skin aint the same shade and this beard is corser//
a new ringtone sounds out of my new-found jeans/
i miss it but hear the voice on the answering machince//
voice harsh as it rasps "Kay get to work now"/
rush to store, have a smoke with what time will allow//
thoughts deep in my brain like a bottomless pit/
filling in the blanks but this jigsaw piece dont fit//
with work finished now i slowly stroll home/
in an enviroment so differnt to what i was shown//
then get on the internet, to relise my avvys got a goatee/
my username was king nep, confused but thats when it hit me//
slap bang in the face, ive just spent the day in his shoes/

[king nep]

Since you replied so quick i ownt keep you waiting

This kids from the uk (which is true) and homeless…. Here it comes

Good morning United Kingdom im homeless an out in the streets//
No body greets and im hungry as fuck with no bread to eat//
So I get up roll some weed on my cardboard sleeper an see I got athletes feet//
This day couldn’t start off any worse its been six months since I’ve had a piece of meat//
I’m trying to cheat death and compete for a meal out the trash can//
Its either cockroaches or government pickups that decrease my life span//
As I think too myself I could have been a man if I stopped using contraband//
An I Never like condoms for protection so I got aids from a one night stand//
Go wash my hands in the public toilet since I don’t have basic sanitation//
I take a good look at myself in the mirror an plead to God for inspiration//
Should get started with my daily routine an beg at the train station//
So little gracious white folk wont even stop for a decent conversation//
I’ll try to convince myself one day i'll be realeased from emacipation//
The only way im gona make it out today is to steal a wallet or get a safe combination//

(BEEP BEEP)My alarm clock goes off I wake up from this nightmare face white I've lost complexion//
More than happy its not my life but that of deception//

Votes are open......

[Alvin]

Storytelling: Nep
Flow: Tie
Creativity: Nep

Its a cat sweep to be honest. I felt as if you (deception), took the topic at face value, while you (nep), took it a step further to throw some jabs, which made a better read. I enjoyed both pieces, both had good substance, but i liked Neps twist in it better. Deception, i liked you battle verse, and nep, i liked your topical. Good battle youz two. Dont forget to link this thread with feed as well.

MVGT: King Nep

[king nep]

Fuk yah my first vote now we talking thanks pd what do you mean about the feed?

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-- Fri Feb 11, 2011 1:22 pm --

66 views one vote where the hip hopers at?????????

[Kuhlerblynd]

I thought Deception came at this with more of the obvious angle, while Nep was more creative with his approach on things. Both flowed pretty similar, but I think Nep's lines come off a little cleaner, though both of you should work on your multi's. Due to the above, Nep's verse was also more enjoyable.

My vote goes to King Nep

[king nep]

2-0 Tx murk

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[Kau the Lion]

I'd say the stories were tied as far as creativity goes. Flow was hard to find in either piece, but Nep just out rhymed Deception. A lot of Deceptions rhymes were too simple or too much of a stretch(water, coarser?). Gotta give this one to Nep.

+1 King Nep

[king nep]

Tx kau much appreciated that use take de time to go threw our pieces ...3-0 Nep

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[Alvin]

That's a KO man, congratulations on your first victory. Topical>Diss

[king nep]

Tx pd need to get my record up to par I'ma keep posting hommi... The 1st sucker I'm gunning is leroi then quix topical.

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[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed and records updated.


Nep wins 3-0.