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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

Post by Quix »

I hope these birds don't think Murk is nice
Don't fire back cuz you'll get serviced twice
There's no one absurd as this kike
Now sit down and start observing ya life


DECENT START

Time to get Murked ...


When it's reppin time I'll make sure ya bite the tech
You're half the reason this fucking site is wrecked
We can catch you sipping beers on suburban nights
Then ya drop verses of shit that's never occurred in ya life!

ouch, nice personal Dog ... LMFAO

Jack already murdered you but I'll still spar with a corpse
How you gonna be nice when over half ya bars are forced!?

dirty fucker ... sparing with a corpse. lolol nice shit right hur

When Yez raise a fist and let the metal spin
Lead and punches will be at ya head like Excedrin
I'll take shots at ya abdomen 'til ya ribs start to settle in
Murk go hard? Naa, there's no way this "vet" will win

meh, nice, but not as dope as those first 4 bars

We know ya color blind but ya should still see the facts straight
The last tournament he joined Murk finished in last place

LMFAO, nice personal

I came with a flaming torch just to bake your corpse
No need to take a score, who's Murk think we're gonna mistake him for!?

decent

And don't lie to me about buying ki's
You only touch base when playing hide and seek

Hahah nice, original line, never saw a hide and seek line before

It's like I'm an OG but, it's a fact you never hold heat
The last iron you touched was to make ya clothes neat!

meh, lron shit is a lil played ... worded nicely tho




Effective diss right here ... Nice Shit mah dude!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by king nep »

nice drop yessir lets see if murks steps up this is gona be interesting...
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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

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haha this was hot J. You really should battle cos I know you'd tear into a lot of cats.

Drop was hot. Fav bars

When Yez raise a fist and let the metal spin
Lead and punches will be at ya head like Excedrin

We know ya color blind but ya should still see the facts straight
The last tournament he joined Murk finished in last place
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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

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Yezzir wrote: I hope these birds don't think Murk is nice
Don't fire back cuz you'll get serviced twice
There's no one absurd as this kike
Now sit down and start observing ya life

Weak opener. C'mon duke, wtf was that even about? Really? Lol.


Time to get Murked ...

Best line in the verse


When it's reppin time I'll make sure ya bite the tech
You're half the reason this fucking site is wrecked

Multi seems forced. Hella forced. Punchline is aight.

We can catch you sipping beers on suburban nights
Then ya drop verses of shit that's never occurred in ya life!

If it were true, I'd give you more props on this one. But it's simply a misleading personal with a decent punch and no wordplay. Real talk.

Jack already murdered you but I'll still spar with a corpse
How you gonna be nice when over half ya bars are forced!?

My bars are forced? Wtf is up with this multi then? And mentioning Jack's name to get yourself some favor somehow doesnt make it a punch. This is one of the better bars though so far.

When Yez raise a fist and let the metal spin
Lead and punches will be at ya head like Excedrin

The best bar so far, seriously, but universal.

I'll take shots at ya abdomen 'til ya ribs start to settle in
Murk go hard? Naa, there's no way this "vet" will win

This was pretty weak.

We know ya color blind but ya should still see the facts straight
The last tournament he joined Murk finished in last place

Again, a misleading personal, since it's not true. But the punch is hitting a little more direct than most of the others.

I came with a flaming torch just to bake your corpse
No need to take a score, who's Murk think we're gonna mistake him for!?

This one is better, but this corpse stuff seems pretty repetitive

And don't lie to me about buying ki's
You only touch base when playing hide and seek

DAMN if this was elementary my dear Watson. I can't believe you posted this. And WHEN have I ever talked about touching ki's? Another misleading personal.

It's like I'm an OG but, it's a fact you never hold heat
The last iron you touched was to make ya clothes neat!

Wow, this was universal AND played.

Okay, I know you are going to read my break down and think I'm just bringing you down a notch because it's about me or whatever, but man, I thought you would come alot better than that. You had very little wordplay, false/misleading personals (which dont make them personals in my eyes), and you used alot of universal/simple punches. I've read your stuff, and this seems like you have gone back to how you approached battles and disses on the site when you first started here, years ago. My opinion, even though I'm sure it won't make shit to you. Just thought I would give you some proper feed.
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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Yezzir wrote: We can catch you sipping beers on suburban nights
Then ya drop verses of shit that's never occurred in ya life!
^^
True to the fullest. You always talk about drinking beers. Then you battle and diss people. And you mention guns in verses all the time. I'm willing to bet you've never held or fired one let alone even seen one.


Yo, you really think I've never held a gun or shot one? That just makes me laugh.

We know ya color blind but ya should still see the facts straight
The last tournament he joined Murk finished in last place
^^
Extremely true personal. You won the first round which was full of a million now shows in the topical tourney. Then lost the very next round due to no show. Lmao

Extremely true personal? Dude, are you fucking retarded. You said I finished in last place, then just said I won in the first round IN A TOURNEY FULL OF NO SHOWS. Which is it? Lol. Stop it. You look retarded.


It's like I'm an OG but, it's a fact you never hold heat
The last iron you touched was to make ya clothes neat!
^^
Played yes. Universal? No cuz you're always talking about guns. Lol

Really though, I'm always talking about guns? Do you even read my verses and have you seen all the shit Ive dropped that never even includes anything about a gun? Lol. You're funny, Josh. Keep at it.
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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

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Just battle or stfu. You're tired, old man.
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Re: The Wrath of War (Reply to Murk)

Post by Deception »

Why don't tad battle? Am sicka these long arse breakdowns lmao, Na really tho instead of passing diss like ur playin pass the parcel with each over just have a battle.

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