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-Im the freshest to death , like im killing the trends
-And I havent changed since cause Im still with my friends
-Ive always stayed sick , took no pills and no meds
-So Ive always laid chicks like I chilled with the hens
-You cant focus on me so keep fixing your lens
-Im the wisest of three , I use bricks to defend
-These rappers are nervous , mess up , and get tense
-Ima bum with these verses , I always make sense
-Im not like an xbox , dont need a connect (kinect)
-Do it all on my own , as I earn my respect
-Im sick with the lines and your minds I infect
-Get more checks than a worker cause im always correct
-If its hard to beleive , put my skills to the test
-As you listen to me , get those chills in your chest
-Like right after you sneeze , you gon' feel you got blessed
-Ive been spitting for free but a deal is whats next

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Up to defend... I thought you could have done better & you did.. I Liked the rest of the verse, stitched it together pretty nice.. good flow.

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Ight thankss man

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