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"Hazards shattered ??"

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Quix : E-makulate Bitch, we mak-ing Paper, while these weak dudes set out to sway the haters

Can't Follow That, No Catching Up..I Thought the
Only Ones Getting Dough off the site was Plex and Rugg
I Thought That Big Money came from Directing Drugs
Shrooms the Script through the eyes of a Shroomed out Quix
Poor sport, Gay at Defeat Like Rocking a Set of Uggs..
Fucking Drag Queen posing as King cause the Text he Tuggs
just a reality rejected scrub..claiming to be a Respected Thug
this sheeps terms light fucking termite can't "Rest the slugs"
a Little trend rider,this In specs a Bug..Insect in Mudd...
I'm not affraid to show my face..you won't Let iLL inspect ya Mug
Parents always said don't Make fun of people with Less then Us..
So the disrespects enough..I'm sure he'd have a camera If he could Get a Buck
Remember hes Proud to be poor His definition of 'Progress..Is Stuck
ILLEST quix isn't Scott he won't be biting anything Unless its Dust..
Like Unorginized Odor..Dude took his Image as being a 'Mess Of Must
Excuse Driven,Like Ya Jail Buddies,you should 'Undress Ya But's
you got a Shitty Vision..you're Ass Eyed Not Acid,Test Ya Blood
Couldn't Stomach Him as Sharpness If I Digested Cuts ..
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Re: "Hazards shattered ??"

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

I was pretty impressed by this drop, honestly. I thought you could have came a little more personal in a diss like this, but your flow was on point, your punchlines were good, and you came direct. Over-all, I thought this was a good diss, but I thought you could have came just a hair harder with the personal aspect of things, and thus making it more of a direct diss. Good job tho Haz, good to see you back in the scripts section.
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Re: "Hazards shattered ??"

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Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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