King Nep vz. Murk McNasty (Murk wins KO)

[Kuhlerblynd]

6 bars

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[king nep]

murk im new to the site so havent voted... ill wait for you post arrhhht

[Kuhlerblynd]

Aight, I'm going the route where shit is more back to the punches... Hope you come with something solid bro...

Welcome to Illest...

King Nep, or is it King PEN??? Hmmm....


Ayo...


You trying to be KingPEN? Fucking with me you better hide ya fam
Go ahead, gangsta, try to plan, how you gonna come out swinging against Spider-Man!?!

'King', I'ma give it the 'slight of hand', but plainly state I don't like this man
You nothing more than a 'trick' trying to get her rocks off listening to a biker band!!!

Boxing match? You about to *know bows* and *you ain't a Raider*, I'm the known pro
Sling this fuck and see how far the ropes go, then PEN this fool after putting him in a choke hold!!!***

King? I best to jest, her skills could be fit for a queen
You don't want to royally piss me off, and get your lungs ripped from the seams!!!
(jest her - jester)

Don't make me back hand ya, catch 'feelings', bitch, and live by that mantra
Then watch me shatter the 'crown' of this King like 'Dentists' with Jack Hammers!!!

This fuck couldn't please us with wealth, I'ma god and I can see you in stealth
Illest gonna witness me murder this King like I was the Jewish government and he was Jesus himself!!!

(just a little reference for those that have no idea... http://www.gotquestions.org/responsible ... death.html)

***- Know Bows - Know Bo's (Bo Jackson formally played for the Raiders)

[king nep]

Murk sorry to post so late im run a club so weekends i dont have time to post ill be droppin my verse in the next hour i hope you ready i wont be holding back.....

-- Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:34 pm --

Raps was never made for “Mercs”, nor wana be rapper clerks, that think they really “funny”
Head on collision with Nep, the outcome is set, Mcnastys the next crash test “dummy “

I hate to do this kid but your should have bowed down to the King an call me your “highness”
Read your daily newspaper for advertisements,King neps bars classic like mozart, flows compared to mastercard “its priceless”

Murk Mcnasty my compound flows magnificent Eintstein defined scientificly..
How can you win a battle if yo punchlines carry no weight an have no date for “delivery”

Infertility Truth be told you only shoot blanks, My guillotine flow serve Mcnasty Lamb “Shanks”
After that you say thanks, put on your running shoes "FOREST" and split like “Tom Hanks”

That’s yo serving for the day and Murk got knocked de fuk out like D-Bo on“Friday”
These punchlines run ova ya face repetitive times like an olmpic "relay"

No disrespect, my styles fresh yours old like it originated from a string “qautet”
After this battle wit Nep, the first step, to bettering yourself is to be discontued like a tdk “cassette”

[leeroi green]

You trying to be KingPEN? Fucking with me you better hide ya fam
Go ahead, gangsta, try to plan, how you gonna come out swinging against Spider-Man!?!
nice
'King', I'ma give it the 'slight of hand', but plainly state I don't like this man
You nothing more than a 'trick' trying to get her rocks off listening to a biker band!!!
meh flows nice
Boxing match? You about to *know bows* and *you ain't a Raider*, I'm the known pro
Sling this fuck and see how far the ropes go, then PEN this fool after putting him in a choke hold!!!***
meh pin in this case is kind of stretch
King? I best to jest, her skills could be fit for a queen
You don't want to royally piss me off, and get your lungs ripped from the seams!!!
(jest her - jester)
better
Don't make me back hand ya, catch 'feelings', bitch, and live by that mantra
Then watch me shatter the 'crown' of this King like 'Dentists' with Jack Hammers!!!
nice
This fuck couldn't please us with wealth, I'ma god and I can see you in stealth
Illest gonna witness me murder this King like I was the Jewish government and he was Jesus himself!!!
really like the close really dont like when emcees say they are god but you are forgiven


Raps was never made for “Mercs”, nor wana be rapper clerks, that think they really “funny”
Head on collision with Nep, the outcome is set, Mcnastys the next crash test “dummy “
okay
I hate to do this kid but your should have bowed down to the King an call me your “highness”
Read your daily newspaper for advertisements,King neps bars classic like mozart, flows compared to mastercard “its priceless”
meh perty basic
Murk Mcnasty my compound flows magnificent Eintstein defined scientificly..
How can you win a battle if yo punchlines carry no weight an have no date for “delivery”
filler filler wheres yo punchline?
Infertility Truth be told you only shoot blanks, My guillotine flow serve Mcnasty Lamb “Shanks”
After that you say thanks, put on your running shoes "FOREST" and split like “Tom Hanks”
the setup here is in previous bar but again meh
That’s yo serving for the day and Murk got knocked de fuk out like D-Bo on“Friday”
These punchlines run ova ya face repetitive times like an olmpic "relay"
not feeling rhyme scheme

not to get off on you to much buddy you said "run ova ya face repetitive times like...." now at this point you want punch instead of "an olmpic "relay" a few words ...like the track at an olympic relay, the way you use it emphasizes run you need to paint a picture of you literally running over his face
No disrespect, my styles fresh yours old like it originated from a string “qautet”
After this battle wit Nep, the first step, to bettering yourself is to be discontued like a tdk “cassette”
i liked the cassette bar in concept and i'm not sure if you meant singing Quartet but it wouldnt help

you got a lot of potential nep but MVGT murk

[Colossus]

Merk had punches and consistency of rhymes. I thought the bars attackin King Pen were wack cause that's not his name. The crown/dentist/jack hammer line was sick.

Nep you need to step your punches up if you want to make it here. Keep practicing. You come with some hard wordplay and you could do something.

V/ Merk

[JDR]

Clean sweep to Murk.

Murk
Thot some of your punches could of came harder. Seen a lot of hard disses and the flow was nice. Multies on point. Either way, enough to take this.

Fav bars -
King? I best to jest, her skills could be fit for a queen
You don't want to royally piss me off, and get your lungs ripped from the seams!!!

Nep
Seen a lot of universal punches and self braggin'. Get at him a lil harder and be more consistant with your disses. Seen some decent punches tho. More personals woulda really helped as well.

Fav Bars
Read your daily newspaper for advertisements,King neps bars classic like mozart, flows compared to mastercard “its priceless”

v/ murk

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thread closed and records updated.


Murk wins KO.