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Audible Thought
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A letter to y'all

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these internet beefs makes me question y'all positions
in the game where fakes are laid to rest by the compositions
made by the insane laying tracks to a better vision
do y'all really get it?... cuz it seems to me y'all are just bitching
having fits like little kids over things not worth the time
if you a man that has a plan, you would be out making a dime
but instead y'all complain and justify with your pride
and your ego, disguised as these silly ass rhymes
y'all might think im dissin but thats far from the non fiction
im just wishin that spittin was taking more seriously
past the criticism of metaphors similies and delivery
its about the heart and soul you put into the music b
im playin my part, helpin out my family, gather up commodities
y'all should go and ask yourselves 'what is my identity?'
in reality i dont give a fuck, i just thought id share a few words
real emcees spit the truth and the truth might strike a few nerves
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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i like your last bar a lot it really solidified the entire drop kingpen shit

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nice written man i'd love to hear this over a killer instrumental! keep it up
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good drop bro. nice work through out.

**y'all might think im dissin but thats far from the non fiction

the wordplay here, tops the entire verse. nice work son. four outa five fo sho
We must always and forever have hip-hops best interest at heart. We must allow ourselves to be critical of the music and culture so that ideas and beliefs that aren’t progressive can be eliminated and made unattractive to our youth. Our allegiance to Hip Hop has to be about more than romanticized ideas of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem. Instead our allegiances must be rooted in what we individually and collectively determine beneficial. The story of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem doesn’t end well. We’ve got proof. Doing what one believes is individually and collectively beneficial may allow for a better ending. Or better yet, no ending at all.
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