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Ain't Bout Ta Give It Up

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If You Want Links, Click Any Topic Within Tha Creation Chamber LOL. Just Experimenting With Sum FX. Don't Mind The Tags, I'm On This Dude's Label. He Just Hasn't Sent Me The Untagged Versions Yet (Been A Busy Week). Lyrics Below. Enjoy!

Ain't Bout To Give Up.mp3

Verse 1
I’m A Raw, Dirty Dude, The Foulest On The Track
And I Work Hard With Tha Words, I Got Calices From That
A Real Cartographer, I Put Dallas On Tha Map
And A King Among Men, But My Palace Is The Rap
My Style Isn’t Whack, It’s Tha Opposite I’m Droppin It,
And All That Shit Ya’ll Makin Now, I’m Stoppin It
N Lockin It, Down And The Key? I’m Blockin It, Tossing It
I’m Positive, I’ma Shut It Down If They Startin It
This Is My Time, The Moment Feels Right Now
(Talk) Ayy South, You Gon Kill It Dawg? YEAH, Like RIGHT NOW
Anyone Who’s “Left Out“, I’ll Take Em To The Right Now
Cuz Ya’ll Been In Tha Dark, So Let’s Take Em To The Light Now
Ay, Pipe Down. . .Keep It On The Low
But 2xS Is Climbing Up, So Speak It Like You Know
Sed Dat I’ma Kill It Now, Dead Tha Instrumental Mayne
Told Ya’ll That It’s ‘Double Time‘, And I Don’t Mean A Tempo Change!



Hook
Say What You Want
Do What You Want
But You Not Gonna Stop Me
I Move What I Want
This Is My Time, (My Time)
My Rhymes, (My Rhymes)
And I Ain’t Bout Ta Give It Up ( I Ain’t Bout Ta Give It Up)
So Go Ahead And Do You
Promise I’ma Do Me
The Focus Is The Music
Promise I’ma Truly
Ride For It (Ride For It)
Die For It (Die For It)
Cuz I Ain’t Bout Ta Give It up, (I Ain’t Bout Ta Give It Up)


Verse 2
I Own Let These Hater’s Chit Chat Mold Or Shake Me
I Use It As The Fuel Just Ta Motivate Me
Still Gon Ride Til My Motor’s Breaking
[Talk] and is he gonna stop?. . .You Know He Can’t Be!
Never Gonna Give It Up, I Grind It Out And Rip It Up
On My Mom’s I’ll Live It Up
And On My Dad I’ll Flip It Up
Take This Verse And Whip It Up
Then Turn Around And Trip It Up
Drop Tha Track So Listen Up
Listen Up, Listen Up!
Tha Name’s 2xS, I’m Sure By Now Dat You Heard Of Me
For All The Skill I Verbally Be Furthering To Murder Beats
Certainly, Talented, I Show It Through My Lyrics
(I Was Made For This Music,) I Know Its In My Spirit
You’ll Know It When You Hear It, My Destiny Is Sealed
Cuz My Words Will Live On When The Rest Of Me Is Killed
For People Still Doubting And Hatin When They Talk
Keep On Doin You, Cuz Doin Me Ain’t Gonna Stop!
Last edited by 2xS on Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Ain't Bout Ta Give It Up

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Yeah.. this is pretty dope! i'm not really a fan of the whole style where the same word is the same and the one before it rhymes but you pulled it off cause your delivery is good and unique, dope.

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hey yea lovin this instrumental bro! killed it! i read the first verse and thought it was a bit iffy but then listened to ur link n u really smashed it out man like sequence said u pulled it off great delivery.
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I love the energy, that's what I like from you, you always bring that energy, real good man....The lyrics are decent you have some good lines, but I think you can come harder...Like the switchup on the second verse that was clean, the chorus isn't bad it moves the song along well and compliments the energy in the verse...I like the production man, good mixing and nice beat...Also can you send me ur email info so I can send u a track I want you to be on with my next mixtape...
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Live shit playa! Good shit!!!

And All That Shit Ya’ll Makin Now, I’m Stoppin It
N Lockin It, Down And The Key? I’m Blockin It, Tossing It
I’m Positive, I’ma Shut It Down If They Startin It


Like how u dropped this part, dope
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This is pretty sick homie... your energy is crazy.. good mixing.. good presences, delivery.. not much i could say bad about this track.. keep it up dude
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Re: Ain't Bout Ta Give It Up

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@ SequencE. . .Good Looks On Listening Man. Yeah I Didn't Even Realize I Wrote Almost Tha Whole Song In That Format Until You Mentioned It LOL

@ Kause. . .Thanks For Listening And Don't Sweat Tha Lyrics LOL, I Moved The Attachment So You'll See That Before The Lyrics

@ Livenlearn. . .Haha Glad Ta Hear You Like It! energy Is My Biggest Thing With My Music Nowadays. If You Heard Some Of My Older Shit, You'd Probably Wanna Slap Me. Believe Me, I Do LOL. Email Shud Be In Your PMs. If Not, Let Me Know And I'll Resend It.

@ Lyrical1. . .Thanks For Listening And Noticing That Part. Like I Sed, Tried ALOT Of New Things With This Song. I'm Sure With Experiments And Stuff I'll Learn How Ta Do Them Better Lol Good Looks Tho

@ Deciple. . .Thanks For Listening, Lol @ How You Can't Say Nothing Bad. I Appreciate That Bro
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Post by Sentus »

This was awesome haha, you're energy was amazing. I can deffinitely see myself bumping this song. Your flow was flawless too. Do you record it all in one take or do punch ins? No hate on punch ins I'm just wondering cause my breath conrol is bad and people have been telling me to do punch ins but I don't know how.
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Re: Ain't Bout Ta Give It Up

Post by 2xS »

Well, This Song Was A One Taker, With Supporters On Certain Words For Widening The Vocals And Filling Up Space. Punch In Usage Is Dictated By How I Write The Song. They're Not A Bad Thing, And If You Want Help With How Ta Do Punch Ins, Message Me, Or If You Have An Instant Messenger Of Sum Sort, Shoot Me Your ID So I Can Give You A Real Time Breakdown Of How Ta Do It Properly.
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