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Glad to be Lost

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http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/glad-to-be-lost

1) still need to make sounds adjustments (still figurin out this dig. studio)

2) not my typical style but gave it a shot, the concept is being lost (away from the world's bs) fyi

HNYr. btw
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the beat is real smooth... i cant see going at it other way then you did.. reminds me of a bone thug smooth track... im feeling it man, concept is nice. Lyrics are real nice.. Delivery came with it, on point.. Hook has improved still need some work.. a "strong vocal" woman would sound nice.. quality is better.. i liked this.. good stuff bro..
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preciate the props deciple. Always good fdbk
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Good Beat. First Vocals You Hear Are Overpowering, Like Your Literally Right Next To The Mic Blowing The Words Into It. Verse Sounds Better. You Have A Laid Back Flow, Kinda Quiet At tImes. Sounds Like Lloyd Banks In My Opinion. "AINT NO CLIQUE LIKE THAT ONE IM WITH!!!" lmao, Ma Bad, Relapse. Anyways, You Don't Have Alot Of Energy On This One, But It Does Fit The Beat IMO. I Like Tha Hook, Cuz It Reminds Me Of My Teenage Years, Getting Lost In Music And Just Lettin It Take You away. Good Shit. 2nd Verse Is By Far The Better, The Whole "Suffering Is Tyranny" Was A Real Good Setup. I Loved How You Did That. You Already Know Your Strengths, no Need To Go There Again. What Program Are you using? Maybe I Can Help You Smoothen Out Your Vocals And All. Hit Me Up Man. Real Good Listen, Probably My Favorite One I've Heard From You Tonite. Really Enjoyed How You Ended With The Maintain Echo.
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Thx for the fdbk 2xS, i got a digital stuido called fostex wit 16 tracks. Its mainly the mike, I need to get a better one. Will do so eventually. My main thing was just to showcase my lyricism. But im def open to suggestions wit it. thx
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ohhh. So Ur Using An Actual Multitrack Recorder!!! I Got You. You're Not Using A Digital Audio Workstation "DAW" Such As ProTools, Mixcraft, Audacity, Cubase, Or Things Like That. Do You Have A Pair Of Reference Monitors? Cuz They Are What You Need For Mixing. It isn't Always The Mic Man, Cuz I'm Using An AKG Perception 200. The Cheapest, Discontinued One From The Perception Line, And You've Heard What My Quality Sounds Like. I'm Still Workin On Polishing It Up, But Yeah Man, It's All About How You Mix It Down
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Naw, no moniters, but ill look into getting some. true pt wit it bein about the mix down. Ima take a lil more time to do it when I done wit a few other records. Then just do em all at the same time.

Good lookin out on the info ^
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Re: Glad to be Lost

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ay lyrical1 really like this one maaaad chillin. this is the sorta track i'd bump drivin home from a bad day at work or sumthin ya no? haha. yeh quality could b better but ive read previous comments n understand u got sum equiptment issues. im in the same boat dude sorta sucks but i think 'average quality' on tracks gives it that underground feel which i really like. so its sort of a love hate sutuation. props man 8/10 for this keep doin ur thing
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thx k-mc, preciate the fdbk, I havent been on in a min but when i get the time ima check out ur drops if u got em
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