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MesaR
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Life Is Always Mine

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/sentu ... 20161.html
http://www.youtube.com/user/0verkill09# ... FaJH115fjc

Kause & Sequence (mesar)

First verse : Seq
Hook : Diverse, remember him?
Second verse : Kause
Shadowville Instrumental.
Australian hiphop, with a canadian hook.. yep

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kyVUCyjsjQ4


Last edited by MesaR on Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Life Is Always Mine

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I'm feeling this, the dubs and mix quality could be better, but the message in the lyrics plus the chorus which is fantastic gives this a unique and cool sound, If this was mixed properly it wouldn't def. be dope listen...I like your flow and Diverse did his thing, so keep it coming guys this is good stuff....Also when you get a chance check out my mixtape http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/life- ... 20168.html either feed or downloaded and hopefully you find something on it you like, pz
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haha pretty different but pretty cool. not bad man. i think the verses could have been turned up a lil bit cuz the beat was overwhelming. but you all did your thing pretty much. holla
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You've got a heavy australian accent haha, I like it. Pretty solid verse overall, need to work on your delivery though. It was alright, but it could be much better, but I know it's hard to get a good delivery if you don't have good quality. I have that same problem. Your lyrics were pretty good and I didn't see any slips in your flow. Good Job.
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Re: Life Is Always Mine

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I WAS WRONG! My Bad For Saying UK. You're Australian, My Apologies! I Really Dig Tha Hook, It's Kinda Upbeat And Just REALLY Fits The Beat Nicely. Yes, The Beat Does Overpower Your Vocals Slightly. Drop Maybe .5 - 1.0db And That Should Fix It. Verses Are Nicely Brought. Mix Was Ok, Not The Best, But Not The Worst. I Can Say I Didn't Struggle To Understand What You Said, So That's A Good Thing. I Don't See What They Mean About Delivery, Cuz I Personally Think It Was Just Fine. Maybe A Little Brush Up On Multis To Make The Flow Sound More Connected, But That's Artist Preference. It Shouldn't Really Have A HUGE Impact On Your Song. Good Joint Tho. I Deff Enjoyed It
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