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lyrical1
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Touch Freeze

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http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/touch-freeze

Random title, i know

I made the beat myself, a while back, no samplin or nothin

Quality, as with the other tracks, is low
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Re: Touch Freeze

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the "intro" kinda was off a little.. when the beat came it was nice.. im a fan of your style and flow.. again as i have stated before is quality really takes from a track.. your not a fan of tracks with hooks are you.. you do like to just flow haha.. but it was nice.. as always again your lyrics are tight.. good drop man
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Re: Touch Freeze

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Nice man, this is actually the first of ur audio's I've listened to, but I'm def gonna be taking a listen to ur future drops (unless u post on youtube, which i think u've done quite often, i can't access youtube). The flow was on point, lots of energy in the delivery, and the lyrics are real nice, though the quality makes it hard to really sink into the words. I think considering u really got some talent in the writing and flow departments u need to invest in some recording equipment to up the quality imo, just a decent but cheap condensor mic and a decent but cheap audio interface and u could up ur quality by a lot. The beat's okay, think I'd appreciate it more if the sound quality was better there too, some of the sounds are really far in the background, so much so that they almost not even there. But overall, I enjoyed listening to this, u def got talent. Keep droppin...
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Re: Touch Freeze

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thx for the feedback and to IC^, thx for that suggestion, Ill look into that. I would find a studio to do these in but time and money kinda kill me. Wit work and bein on probation, lol, its hard to get shit done that way id like it.

Thx for the feedback, the props and for listening
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Re: Touch Freeze

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For A Beat U Made Yourself, It's Not that Bad. Verse Started Off Shaky, But Then Smoothened Out. Yet Again, Your Strong Points Are: Vocab, Multi's, Delivery, And Flow. I Can Show A Few Quotables, But For The Most Part, You Already Know What My Feed Is Gonna Consist Of. "Touch Freeze" Is Random Lol.
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